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Message de tallox posté le 2004-05-06 02:12:08 (S | E | F | I)
4 ieme essaie
The cat my neighbor.
I talked in the forest along the river yesterday, I saw a cute little dog, it must be to my neighbor, I thought . I took spontaneously the dog in my arms, I brought whit me.
Presently, I am thinking that everybody who have a dog, could take care its animal. I seem to me that it isen’t difficult.
If I were riche, I would buy enough big house for all kind animals.
I dare to hop , that there aren't lots of mistake.
Tallox
4 ieme essaie
The cat my neighbor.
I talked in the forest along the river yesterday, I saw a cute little dog, it must be to my neighbor, I thought . I took spontaneously the dog in my arms, I brought whit me.
Presently, I am thinking that everybody who have a dog, could take care its animal. I seem to me that it isen’t difficult.
If I were riche, I would buy enough big house for all kind animals.
I dare to hop , that there aren't lots of mistake.
Tallox
Réponse: re de lamerican, postée le 2004-05-06 02:38:38 (S | E)
The cat,my neighbor.
I was walking in the forest yesterday ,along the river . I saw a cute little dog, he must belong to my neighbor. I took spontaneously the dog in my arms, and brought with me.
Presently, I am thinking that anybody who have a dog, could take care of his animal. it doesn't look difficult to me.
If I were riche, I would buy enough big houses for all kind of animals.
good job!!
i hope this will help you a little bit!
LAMERICAN
Réponse: re de tallox, postée le 2004-05-06 03:04:41 (S | E)
merci beaucoup a toi.
Tallox
Réponse: re de chrisg, postée le 2004-05-06 06:37:57 (S | E)
The cat of My neighbor.
I was walking in the forest along the river yesterday, I saw a cute little dog, that should belong to my neighbor, I thought . I took spontaneously the dog in my arms, I brought it with me.
Today, I think that everybody who has a dog should be very careful with it. It seems to me that it isn’t difficult.
If I were rich, I would buy a house big enough for all kind of animals.
Réponse: re de tallox, postée le 2004-05-06 15:56:29 (S | E)
merci Chrisg, je vais imprimer mon texte et le corriger.
merci!
Tallox
Réponse: Voisin-Voisine de maureplain, postée le 2004-05-06 16:10:19 (S | E)
Neighbour = voisin/ne UK
Neighbor = voisin/ne US
Cat (title) or dog (text) ???
Réponse: re de tallox, postée le 2004-05-06 16:26:44 (S | E)
it's dog
lllllTallox
Réponse: re de hereiam, postée le 2004-05-06 19:23:02 (S | E)
I would have linked the two first sentences by:when, just to emphasize the sentence. and the adverb spontaneously after the COD
I took the dog spontaneously or I spontaneously took..... and brought it with me
today or Nowadays?
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