Correction /clip

Correction /clip
Message de dadoush35 posté le 12-03-2015 à 14:55:50 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous!
Je poste aujourd'hui ce message car j'aurai besoin d'une correction d'un texte s'il vous plait
Le voici :
We were so excited, we were looking forward to it, we were a bit scared at the same time, we hoped that this first extract and this first video clip please to you as much as he pleases to us, and tonight, we are so glad ! Thanks for your nice payback, your sweet nothing, your encouragements, it is so heartwarming, it's really a big pleasure for us !
Carry on to share it, the next part is getting ready...
Oh, and we forgot, here are the lyrics :

Je vous remercie d'avance, bonne journée!

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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-03-2015 19:29

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Réponse: Correction /clip de gerondif, postée le 14-03-2015 à 19:24:17 (S | E)
Hello,
We were so excited, we were looking forward to it, we were a bit scared at the same time, we hoped that this first extract and this first video clip (conditionnel en would)please to(à enlever) you as much as he pleases to (à enlever) us, and tonight, we are so glad ! Thanks for your nice payback(sens?), your sweet nothing (sens?), your encouragements, it is so heartwarming, it's really a big pleasure for us !
Carry on to(keep on + ing) share it, the next part is getting ready...
Oh, and we forgot, here are the lyrics :

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