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Message de barbaraz posté le 03-03-2013 à 18:51:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
suite à la reception de vos réponses j'ai corrigé ce qui me semblait incorrect. Pourriez-vous vérifier si cela a un sens et est correct?
Merci de votre aide.
All our life is marked by the presence of traditions, some of them being very deeply rooted in our daily lives. Traditions connect us to the past, they connect us to the generations that have preceded us. The best traditions are certainly those who can enrich future generations without oppressing them. The worst are precisely those that stifle an individual person and society, preventing them flourish. Should live with or get rid of?
The traditions indicate so essential that we live in a historical dimension: we do not arrive on earth with no history, no baggage, others has gone before us and have left behind them a legacy of cultural, economic and religious befalls us and we need to manage one way or another.
traditions are periodic benchmarks allow us to remember, to get together and know us better. we need festivals, both as benchmarks in life as joy and entertainment.
I think keeping the traditions in our lives is important because a tradition consolidates community ties and identity of a group of individuals over time.
The tradition of the community of individuals who inherit, and this community heiress guarantees the continuity of the tradition.
Recall that the attachment to tradition is not a withdrawal opinions of the past, but rather the current support of a deeper life.
The contemporary world should not forget.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-03-2013 18:59
Message de barbaraz posté le 03-03-2013 à 18:51:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
suite à la reception de vos réponses j'ai corrigé ce qui me semblait incorrect. Pourriez-vous vérifier si cela a un sens et est correct?
Merci de votre aide.
All our life is marked by the presence of traditions, some of them being very deeply rooted in our daily lives. Traditions connect us to the past, they connect us to the generations that have preceded us. The best traditions are certainly those who can enrich future generations without oppressing them. The worst are precisely those that stifle an individual person and society, preventing them flourish. Should live with or get rid of?
The traditions indicate so essential that we live in a historical dimension: we do not arrive on earth with no history, no baggage, others has gone before us and have left behind them a legacy of cultural, economic and religious befalls us and we need to manage one way or another.
traditions are periodic benchmarks allow us to remember, to get together and know us better. we need festivals, both as benchmarks in life as joy and entertainment.
I think keeping the traditions in our lives is important because a tradition consolidates community ties and identity of a group of individuals over time.
The tradition of the community of individuals who inherit, and this community heiress guarantees the continuity of the tradition.
Recall that the attachment to tradition is not a withdrawal opinions of the past, but rather the current support of a deeper life.
The contemporary world should not forget.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-03-2013 18:59
Réponse: Rédaction/traditions de alsa68, postée le 04-03-2013 à 11:27:08 (S | E)
Bonjour!
Juste un point pour vous permettre de progresser un peu.
"Should we live with or get rid of ?" Vous devez compléter la phrase avec un COD car telle quelle est écrite ça fait vraiment bizarre. Pareil pour votre dernière phrase.
Ce ne sont que mes opinions. Bon courage à vous et méfiez-vous des traducteurs automatiques.
Cordialement
Réponse: Rédaction/traditions de barbaraz, postée le 04-03-2013 à 11:34:14 (S | E)
Effectivement vous avez tout à fait raison certaines phrases ne sont pas cohérente et il manque le cod , j'ai corrigé mes erreurs merci pour votre aide! bonne journée
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