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Message de eva54 posté le 13-02-2013 à 15:40:13 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,

Je passe demain un oral en anglais pour le brevet blanc. Je dois me présenter pendant au moins 2 minutes.
Pouvez-vous me dire s'il y a des fautes , si les phrases sont bien formulées ?
Merci d'avance

My name is Eva.I was born on 29th November 1998. I’m fourteen. I live in Vieville en haye in land .I’m French.. I’ve got 1 sister and 1 brother: Manon and Jason. Manon is sixteen. Jason is eleven. My mother is Virginie, she is Draftswoman. My father is Jean-Luc, he is farmer. I’ve got many rabbits and many cows. I enjoy playing synthesizer during my free time. I’m in academy musical of France. Every year, I participate in the competition.. I’m fond of dancing and listening to music at week-end. Everything every Saturday, I go to my grand-parents to find my cousins . I love my family. I go on holidays 3 times a year: to Easter, to All saints day and in Summer holidays. I already went in England: London and Cornwall, in Amsterdam in the low country, in Belgium and in a lot of places in France. Next year, I shall like going to second scientist at the high school Henri Poincaré to Nancy. Later, I shall like becoming a pediatrician because I love children. At school my favorite subjects is math, geography and technology. I’ve got blond hair and blue eyes. I’m small. I’m very talkative.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-02-2013 21:26


Réponse: Aide/ oral de sherry48, postée le 13-02-2013 à 18:15:25 (S | E)
Hello.
My name is Eva.I was born on 29th November 1998. I’m fourteen. I live in Vieville en haye in land .I’m French.. I’ve got 1 sister and 1 brother: Manon and Jason. Manon is sixteen. Jason is eleven. My mother is Virginie, she is __ Draftswoman. My father is Jean-Luc, he is __ farmer. I’ve got many rabbits and many cows. I enjoy playing __ synthesizer during my free time. I’m in academy musical of France. Every year, I participate in the competition. I’m fond of dancing and listening to music at __ week-end. Everything every Saturday, I go to my grandparents to find (a different verb?) my cousins. I love my family. I go on holidays 3 times a year: to Easter, to All saints day and in Summer holidays. I already went in England: London and Cornwall, in Amsterdam in the low country, in Belgium and in a lot of places in France. Next year, I shall like going to second scientist at the high school Henri Poincaré to Nancy. Later, I shall like becoming a pediatrician because I love children. At school my favorite subjects is math, geography and technology. I’ve got blond hair and blue eyes. I’m small. I’m very talkative.

born on __ 29th __ November...(to use 29th) or use 29

shall like going/becoming...use would like + infinitive

Sherry





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