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Correction /immigration

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Correction /immigration
Message de maleledu91 posté le 27-11-2012 à 18:05:23 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,

Pouvez-vous corriger ma rédaction s'il vous plait?
Merci pour vos réponses.


Hello, my name is Paula Carta. I am thirty-two years old. I came here to tell you about my immigration. There are eighteen, I immigrated in the US. I followed mY husband for political reasons. I am married and I have three children. There is Mickael, Paulo and Carmen. My country of origin is Cuba of Havana. I emmigrated because in my country there were the Cuban Revolution. On your trip, we took the boat to get to Miami. In the boat, we had very little room. We were sixty in the small room. The journey lasted six hours. Then come to the US, we crossed the customs. We took a car anD we were in NEW-YORK. NEW-YORK is a great city to Havana. I don't speak English but I learnt. I like my city ans my country of origin.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-11-2012 22:11


Réponse: Correction /immigration de gerondif, postée le 27-11-2012 à 22:41:51 (S | E)
Hello,
Hello, my name is Paula Carta. I am thirty-two years old. I came here to tell you about my immigration. There are eighteen, I immigrated in the US. I followed mY husband for political reasons. I am married and I have three children. There is Mickael, Paulo and Carmen. My country of origin is Cuba of Havana. I emmigrated because in my country there were the Cuban Revolution. On your trip, we took the boat to get to Miami. In the boat, we had very little room. We were sixty in the small room. The journey lasted six hours. Then come to the US, we crossed the customs. We took a car anD we were in NEW-YORK. NEW-YORK is a great city to Havana. I don't speak English but I learnt. I like my city ans my country of origin.






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