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Sahara/correction

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Sahara/correction
Message de said16 posté le 17-05-2012 à 12:07:46 (S | E | F)
Good morning everybody !

I have just written this paragraph about Sahara (desert). I'll be very glad if you help me to correct the mistakes that I did made .
Thank you !

Sahara is an amazing place which deserve the visit . Hoggar is one of its gorgeous sites . You have to spend 2200 KMS starting from Algiers to reach there . It's situated in the south . Hoggar has high mounts but the highest one is Tassili . Sahara's weather is very hot an sunny summer but cold in winter . The Saharian people wear traditional clothes which protect them from the high temperature and grains of sand . We only listen the clap of their hands . This's the method that they use to make music .
This was simple information about Algerian Sahara.

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Modifié par said16 le 17-05-2012 12:09

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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-05-2012 13:56


Réponse: Sahara/correction de dolfine56, postée le 17-05-2012 à 14:57:56 (S | E)
Hello,

Sahara is an amazing place which deserve the visit . Hoggar is one of its gorgeous sites . You have to spend 2200 KMS starting from Algiers to reach there . It's situated in the south . Hoggar has high mounts but the highest one is Tassili . Sahara's weather is very hot an sunny - summer but cold in winter . The Saharian people wear traditional clothes which protect them from the high temperature and grains of sand . We only listen the clap of their hands . This's the method that they use to make music .
This was simple information about Algerian Sahara.

The verbs 'deserve and wear'are third person ,in the singular.
very few mistakes...



Réponse: Sahara/correction de lucile83, postée le 17-05-2012 à 15:04:20 (S | E)
Hello,

Sahara is an amazing place which deserve the visit . Hoggar is one of its gorgeous sites . You have to spend 2200 KMS starting from Algiers to reach there . It's situated in the south . Hoggar has high mounts but the highest one is Tassili . Sahara's weather is very hot an sunny ... summer but cold in winter . The Saharian people wear traditional clothes which protect them from the high temperature and grains of sand . We only listen the clap of their hands . This's the method that they use to make music .
This was simple information about Algerian Sahara.




Réponse: Sahara/correction de bluestar, postée le 17-05-2012 à 17:04:02 (S | E)
Hello..

Desert names usually need the definite article..."The Gobi Desert" "The Kalahari Desert" etc.,
The adjective should be "Saharan", on the lines of "Alaska.. Alaskan", "Cuba...Cuban" - that is, where the last letter is a vowel and the previous one is a consonant.
"Hoggar has high mounts"........"mounts"??
"We only listen the clap of their hands"....preposition missing here.





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