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Message de walid75010 posté le 18-10-2009 à 19:15:57 (S | E | F)
Bonjour je dois écrire "une lettre au ministre de l'environnement", ou je dois lui écrire 5 problemes sur le rechauffement climatique et trouvé 5solutions, pour linstant jen ai trouvé que 3 mai pouvez vous tout de meme me corrigez svp, merci :
Monday, october 19th 2009 Tour Voltaire ,92055 La Défense CEDEX
Dear Environment minister,
I noticed, like all the world that there's many problems, which increases global warming, but there are simple solutions to these problems. I give you some tips you can send people to reduce global warming. We can stop the deforestation if all the people buy paper certified by an organization that protects the jungle because the jungle habitat of animals who are essential for our lifes. An other problem is there are too much waste who crate pollution, so we can put the waste into "no compost. The people must use public transport more often in commun electric vehicles to dismiss less Co2 possible because our air is so polluted.i'm looking forward to getting an answer.
YOUR SINCERELY
Réponse: Lettre global warming de seb06000, postée le 18-10-2009 à 19:24:23 (S | E)
bonsoir,
je vous donne les indications pour parfaire votre travail:
'Dear Environment minister( expression à revoir),
I noticed, like all the world that there's many problems ( verbe au singulier suivi d'un nom au pluriel? il faut accorder), which increases (idem many problems est pluriel) global warming, but there are simple solutions to these problems. I give you some tips you can send people to reduce global warming. We can stop the deforestation if all the people (expression à revoir) buy paper certified by an organization that protects the jungle because the jungle habitat of animals who (relatif) are essential for our lifes. An other problem is (il manque un relatif) there are too much waste who (relatif) crate (voc ) pollution, so we can put the waste into 'no compost (sens?). The people must use public transport more often in commun electric vehicles to dismiss less Co2 possible (expression à revoir) because our air is so polluted.i'm looking forward to getting an answer.
YOUR SINCERELY
Voilà n'hésitez pas si souci!
Amicalement
sebastien
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Modifié par seb06000 le 18-10-2009 19:25
Réponse: Lettre global warming de walid75010, postée le 18-10-2009 à 19:52:46 (S | E)
Merci , voila une autre version, il ya quelque erreurs que je n'ais pas reussi a corriger..
'Dear M. jean-louis BORLOO,
I noticed, like all the world that there are many problems , which are increases global warming, but there are simple solutions to these problems. I give you some tips you can send people to reduce global warming. We can stop the deforestation if everybody buy paper certified by an organization that protects the jungle because the jungle is habitat of animals which
are essential for our lifes. An other problem is that there are too much waste which make pollution, so we can put the waste into "coin de compost" (je ne sais pas le dire). The people must use public transport more often in commun electric vehicles to dismiss less Co2 because our air is so polluted. i'm looking forward to getting an answer.
YOUR SINCERELY
Réponse: Lettre global warming de walid75010, postée le 19-10-2009 à 18:31:09 (S | E)
svp vou pouvez m'aider?
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