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Bloody-Mary/ correction (1)

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Bloody-Mary/ correction
Message de chacha1993 posté le 20-02-2009 à 16:05:37 (S | E | F)

Bonjour, alors voilà un morceau de mon exposé d'anglais et j'aimerais savoir si il n'y a pas trop de fautes svp ?!
The legend of Bloody-Mary

Bloody-Mary has a very precise definition, it is an alcoholic drink, a breuvage refresh, but according to the legend, that or the one who pronounces thirteen times Bloody Mary in front of a mirror in a dark place will create an avenging spirit (in theory a woman should appear in the mirror), the favorable place for this invocation would be the bathroom, it is also advised to use one or two candle in front of mirror.

According to the credibility it is also told that if you said seven times Hell Mary in front of a mirror the image of Satan would be visible, if you said it three times the mirror would be of red color and after five times a dark face would be visible.The instructions for use of this urban legend are told différament of generation in generation, some people indicate that the mirror must be illuminated by a single candle and with the other one say that he has to have a candle there on each side. In some versions, the invocation has to be only made that by a girl who is voluntary, the number of repetition(rehearsal) of Bloody Mary is different also.

The simple name of invocation also changes there is Bloody Mary, Hell Mary, Mary Worthington, Mary Lou, Mary Jane and Bloody Bones. The result(profit) of this invocation is also different, we can see in the mirror a woman striking corpses, she can simply stare at that or at the one who looks at her(it) or she can scratch himself violently the face. About Mary Lou's first name, a horror movie used this first name in its title; Hello Mary Lou: Prom Night II ( 1987 ).

The version most repended suggests to enter your bathroom and to switch off the light, up in front of a mirror you have to begin to say in voice(vote) base Bloody Mary and afterward more and more hardly, during that you pronounce Bloody Mary you owe turn(shoot) around the mirror and every time you walk past the mirror you have to look at him(it).Having pronounced Bloody Mary 13 times, a woman should appear in the mirror. The result(profit), having experimented this rite, a person would have seemed to be really terrified (according to witnesses(batons)) by this experience(experiment) and would have refused to speak about details of the incident.

In another source(spring) we tell the history(story) of a girl who having ended the invocation would have said " I do not believe to you Bloody Mary ", and she broke himself the hip at her exit(release) of the bathroom. The repetition(rehearsal) of the same name or word is frequent in witchcraft, but it draws the attention in the world of the comedy of horror.In the film Beetlejuice ( 1988 ), they have to call Beetlejuice three times for the services of the bio-exorcizer of the other world. It is the same case for the film Candyman ( 1992 ).

Bloody Mary: an origin so bumpy as his(her,its) legend We say that she is a witch who was executed hundred years ago to have practised the black magic, or a more modern woman of the time(weather) who died in a car accident in which the face was horribly mutilated.

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Modifié par bridg le 20-02-2009 16:17
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Réponse: Bloody-Mary/ correction de azer3, postée le 20-02-2009 à 18:29:42 (S | E)

Bonjour, voici quelques corrections:
Bloody-Mary has a very precise definition, it is an alcoholic drink, a breuvage/c'est du français/ refresh, but according to the legend, that or the one who pronounces thirteen times "Bloody Mary" in front of a mirror in a dark place will create an avenging spirit (in theory a woman should appear in the mirror), the favorable place for this invocation would be the bathroom, it is also advised to use one or two candle in front of mirror.

According to the credibility it is also told that if you said seven times "Hell Mary" in front of a mirror/virgule/ the image of Satan would be visible, if you said it three times the mirror would be of/on dit pas of red color/ red color and after five times a dark face would be visible.The instructions for/to/ use of this urban legend are told différament/c'est du français/ of generation in generation/peut être from generation to generation/, some people indicate that the mirror must be illuminated by a single candle and with the other one say /conjugue le verbe/ that he has to have a candle there on each side. In some versions, the invocation has to be only made that by a girl who is voluntary, the number of repetition(rehearsal) of Bloody Mary is different also.

The simple name of invocation also changes: "there is Bloody Mary, Hell Mary, Mary Worthington, Mary Lou, Mary Jane and Bloody Bones". The result(profit) of this invocation is also different, we can see in the mirror a woman striking corpses, she can simply stare at that or at the one who looks at her(it) or she can scratch himself/herself/ violently the face. About Mary Lou's first name, a horror movie used this first name in its title; Hello Mary Lou: Prom Night II ( 1987 ).

The version most repended/vérifie/ suggests to enter your bathroom and to switch off the light, up in front of a mirror you have to begin to say in voice(vote) base/c'est du français + l'adjective se place avant le sujet/ Bloody Mary and afterward more and more hardly, during that you pronounce Bloody Mary you owe turn(shoot) around the mirror and every time you walk past the mirror you have to look at him(it). "After" Having pronounced Bloody Mary 13 times, a woman should appear in the mirror. The result(profit), /after/ having experimented this rite, a person would have seemed to be really terrified (according to witnesses(batons)) by this experience(experiment) and would have refused to speak about details of the incident.

In another source(spring) we tell the history(story) of a girl who having/has/ ended the invocation would have said " I do not believe to you Bloody Mary ", and she broke himself the hip at her exit(release) of the bathroom. The repetition(rehearsal) of the same name or word is frequent in witchcraft, but it draws the attention in the world of the comedy of horror.In the film Beetlejuice ( 1988 ), they have to call Beetlejuice three times for the services of the bio-exorcizer/vérifie/ of the other world. It is the same case fo/in/ the film /of/ "Candyman" ( 1992 ).

Bloody Mary: an origin so bumpy as his(her,its) legend/point/ We say that she is a witch who was executed hundred years ago to have practised the black magic, or a more modern woman of the time(weather) who died in a car acciden








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