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Napoléon (1)

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Napoléon
Message de michaeljackson posté le 01-11-2008 à 22:18:25 (S | E | F)

Bonjour , je dois faire une rédaction en anglais sur Napoléon en genre sous la formr de de questions / réponses et je voudrais que vous me disiez qu'es qui n'allait pas dans cela mes erreurs :

Napoléon Bonaparte
Good mornig mister , you are expert in history but especially expert in time Napoléon’s . You were working in Harvard and you like Napoleon’s history , I would like you ask question about him .Let’s begin !

What was his name ?
He was name naturally Napoleon Bonaparte , he was not known by any other name

What was he like ? (description + qualité )
He was very intelligent , he was very also very good in engineering and leadership . His recruitement methods were also great , in fact they were so great that he created one of the biggest armies ever. For example The Big Army had divided in 300 000 soldiers .
The questions other ?
Yes !
What did they look like ?
Young or old ?
Young !
Ok , he was white , his was Red-haired and his black eyes . I find that he frightens.
Where and When was he born ?
Oh , he was born in France on isles Corsica from Ajaccio in 1769
Was he married ?
Yes ,twice , he married with Joséphine de Beauharnais the 9th march 1796 and Marie Louise d’Autriche the 2nd april 1810 . He divorced with Joséphine in the 15th december 1809 because she was sterile .
Did He have children ?
Yes , with Marie Louise . HE called Napoléon Français Joseph Charles Bonaparte, he was boring the 20th March 1911 and died the 22th july 1832 . He was too two son Out of wedlock (hors mariage ? ) Charles , comte Léon was boring in 1806 and died in 1881 , and Alexandre , comte Walewski born the 4th may 1810 and died the 27th october 1868 .
What was he Nationality ?
He was French Because he was boring in Corsica .
Why was he Celebrate ?
The battle of the Three Emperors ( Austerlitz ) is the battle celebrate . Napoléon had 73200 soldiers and 139 artillery guns whereas Alexandre 1er and François II had 85 400 soldiers and 278 artillery guns . At the end , napoléon won the battle with 11 000 prisoners and 180 artillery guns . The army french killed approximately .35000 soldiers for 1500 french killed . He invented the french civil code . The battles Wagram is too celebrate because it’s the battles significant . He invented too , the hight school for everybody .
When , how and why was he died ?
He is died on isles Sainte-Hélène the 5th may 1821 . He died strangely , nobody how he died . Maby the cancer or the poisonig .

voilà merci au revoir
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Modifié par bridg le 01-11-2008 22:27


Réponse: Napoléon de michaeljackson, postée le 03-11-2008 à 17:41:56 (S | E)
personne ne peux m'aider ?


Réponse: Napoléon de laure95, postée le 03-11-2008 à 18:14:27 (S | E)
Bonjour, voici ce que tu dois corriger:
- in time Napoleon's.
-Napoleon’s history: Napoleon.
- I would like you ask question: i would like to ask you question.
- He was name: his name was.
- The Big Army had divided: the Big Army was divided into.
- The questions other ?
- his was Red-haired: tu confonds HE (il) et HIS (son, sa, ses)!
- and his black eyes: même remarque + utiliser le verbe HAVE GOT.
- on isles Corsica: on the Corsica isles
- from Ajaccio: in Ajaccio.
- he married with.
- He divorced with
- HE called: he was called.
- he was boring the 20th March 1911? (boring: ennuyant).
- He was too two son: verbe HAVE GOT + mettre le pluriel à SON.
- Out of wedlock (hors mariage ? ): je ne sais pas.
- born: naitre: BE BORN.
- What was he Nationality ?
- Why was he Celebrate ?: why was he famous?
- the battle celebrate: the famous battle.
- The battles Wagram is too celebrate: même remarque.
- it’s the battles significant: ?
- When , how and why was he died ?: revoir construction d'une question.
- He is died: preterit des verbes réguliers: infinitif + -ed.
- nobody how: nobody knew.
- Maby: problème d'orthographe.

Bon courage pour les corrections!




Réponse: Napoléon de azer3, postée le 03-11-2008 à 19:17:53 (S | E)
Napoléon Bonaparte
Good mornig mister, you are expert in history but especially Napoléon’s time. You was working in Harvard and you like Napoleon’s history , I would like to ask you some question about him. Let’s begin.

What is his name ?
His natural name is Napoleon Bonaparte, he was not called by any other name.

What did he like? (description + qualité )
He was very intelligeent. Also, he was very good in engineering and leadership. His recruiting methods were also great that he created one of the biggest armies ever created.For example The Big Army was divided into 300 000 soldiers
Other questions?
Yes!
how did he look like? Young or old ?
Young!
Ok, he was white , his hair was Red and his eyes was blakc.you can say that he make you frightening.
Where and When he was born ?
Oh, he was born in France on isles Corsica from Ajaccio in 1769.
Did he been married ?

Yes ,twice , he married with Joséphine de Beauharnais the 9th march 1796 and Marie Louise d’Autriche the 2nd april 1810. He divorced with Joséphine in the 15th december 1809 because she was sterile .
Did He have children ?
Yes ,he has a boy from Marie Louise. HE called Napoléon Français Joseph Charles Bonaparte, he was born the 20th March 1911 and he died the 22th july 1832 . He has two other children Out of wedlock:Charles, comte Léon borin in 1806 and died in 1881, and Alexandre , comte Walewski born the 4th may 1810 and died the 27th october 1868 .
What was his Nationality ?
He was French Because he born in Corsica .
What he Celebrate?
The battle of the Three Emperors ( Austerlitz ) is the most celebrated battle . Napoléon had been with 73200 soldiers and 139 artillery guns.however Alexandre the first and François II had been with 85 400 soldiers and 278 artillery guns . At the end , napoléon won the battle with 11 000 prisoners and 180 artillery guns. The french army hav been approximately killed .1500 soldiers for 35000 french had been killed.
He invented the french civil code . The Wagram battles is too celebrate because it’s the most significant battles. He also invented , the hight school for everybody .
When, how and why he died ?
He died on isles Sainte-Hélène the 5th may 1821. He died strangely , nobody knews how he died. Maby the cancer or the poisonig.
Attention au fautes de structuration, de conjugaison et les fautes de frappe ainsi que les fautes d'orthographe.bonne contunuationa AZER3


Réponse: Napoléon de michaeljackson, postée le 04-11-2008 à 14:53:13 (S | E)
merci beaucoup




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