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Message de sean01 posté le 17-07-2008 à 14:54:11 (S | E | F)
Dear Stacy and Sean
We’re here in London at last (the Eurostar journey through the Channel tunnel is great ).
Tomorrow morning we’re going sightseeing. We’re visiting Buckingham Palace and Trafalgar Square first, and in the afternoon we’re going to Madame Tussaud’s museum to see the waxworks. We’re eating at the hotel in the evening, because everyone says it’s cheaper.
The next day we’re taking the train to Scotland. It leaves Euston station at 9.45 am so we’ve got plenty of time. From Glasgow we’re starting our adventure holiday. We’re travelling to the Trossachs ( local mountains), where we’re hiking and camping for a whole week. Let’s hope the weather’s fine !
The last post is collected at 7 pm, so it’s time to put this in box just outside the hotel.
See you later
Take care
Monica and Roberto
Hello voila une petite lettre que je viens de rédiger à l'instant qu'en pensez vous ?
Message de sean01 posté le 17-07-2008 à 14:54:11 (S | E | F)
Dear Stacy and Sean
We’re here in London at last (the Eurostar journey through the Channel tunnel is great ).
Tomorrow morning we’re going sightseeing. We’re visiting Buckingham Palace and Trafalgar Square first, and in the afternoon we’re going to Madame Tussaud’s museum to see the waxworks. We’re eating at the hotel in the evening, because everyone says it’s cheaper.
The next day we’re taking the train to Scotland. It leaves Euston station at 9.45 am so we’ve got plenty of time. From Glasgow we’re starting our adventure holiday. We’re travelling to the Trossachs ( local mountains), where we’re hiking and camping for a whole week. Let’s hope the weather’s fine !
The last post is collected at 7 pm, so it’s time to put this in box just outside the hotel.
See you later
Take care
Monica and Roberto
Hello voila une petite lettre que je viens de rédiger à l'instant qu'en pensez vous ?
Réponse: Holiday plans de chrislondon, postée le 17-07-2008 à 20:30:56 (S | E)
Hi,
Your letter is very good! Just a couple of things to correct:
The journey through the Channel Tunnel is great. Use the past tense here.
It's time to put this in box just outside the hotel. You need to use a definite article before 'box'.