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Message de marc92 posté le 09-01-2008 à 17:02:01 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous svp me donner votre avis sur cet essai ?
Merci d'avance.
Cordialement.
What do you think about this new guitar ?
According to me, this new gadget will have a very long life. And more preciously, I think that this appliance is bound to become one of the most important thing for people who used to play the guitar.
Moreover for each person who plays a musical instrument, to tune an instrument is synonymous with the word chore. Indeed, due to temperature, guitar’s string slacken or tighten, and the sound becomes different. I know that it seems ridiculous, but it’s true. A simple increase of the temperature or the humidity, is enough to put out of the tune an instrument. So, in my mind it’s a breakthrough because thanks to this invention, it could be easier to have a better sound. I think that today all the guitars are sold, but if I had made enough money during last holliday, I would have buy this guitar.
Message de marc92 posté le 09-01-2008 à 17:02:01 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous svp me donner votre avis sur cet essai ?
Merci d'avance.
Cordialement.
What do you think about this new guitar ?
According to me, this new gadget will have a very long life. And more preciously, I think that this appliance is bound to become one of the most important thing for people who used to play the guitar.
Moreover for each person who plays a musical instrument, to tune an instrument is synonymous with the word chore. Indeed, due to temperature, guitar’s string slacken or tighten, and the sound becomes different. I know that it seems ridiculous, but it’s true. A simple increase of the temperature or the humidity, is enough to put out of the tune an instrument. So, in my mind it’s a breakthrough because thanks to this invention, it could be easier to have a better sound. I think that today all the guitars are sold, but if I had made enough money during last holliday, I would have buy this guitar.
Réponse: essai de hobbes007, postée le 10-01-2008 à 16:17:12 (S | E)
According to me, this new gadget will have a very long life. And more preciously, I think that this appliance is bound to become one of the most important thing for people who used to play the guitar.
Moreover for each person who plays a musical instrument, to tune an instrument is synonymous with the word chore. Indeed, due to temperature, guitar’s string slacken or tighten, and the sound becomes different. I know that it seems ridiculous, but it’s true. A simple increase of the temperature or the humidity, is enough to put out the tune of an instrument. So, in my mind it’s a breakthrough because thanks to this invention, it will be easier to have a better sound. I think that today all the guitars are sold, but if I had made enough money during last holliday, I would have buy this guitar.
c'est bien dans l'ensemble, corrige ces erreurs et c'est bon.
