Correction/ 5 phrases
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Message de ckenymis posté le 15-03-2019 à 17:39:02 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Can you check if these sentences are correct ?
Thank you !
1) I am a big protector of the environment and animals
2) I am not like these hundreds of others girls who want to catch people's attention
3) We feed animals saved from abandonment or slaughterhouse
4) We regularly organize manifestations also, so that people can become aware of their part in the exploitation of billions of animals
5) There are as many animals to rescue in Dunkirk as in Compiegne
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-03-2019 17:16
Message de ckenymis posté le 15-03-2019 à 17:39:02 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Can you check if these sentences are correct ?
Thank you !
1) I am a big protector of the environment and animals
2) I am not like these hundreds of others girls who want to catch people's attention
3) We feed animals saved from abandonment or slaughterhouse
4) We regularly organize manifestations also, so that people can become aware of their part in the exploitation of billions of animals
5) There are as many animals to rescue in Dunkirk as in Compiegne
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-03-2019 17:16
Réponse : Correction/ 5 phrases de laure95, postée le 16-03-2019 à 17:15:14 (S | E)
Hello,
1) I am a big protector of the environment and animals OK
2) I am not like these hundreds of others (pas de s à other) girls who want to catch people's attention
3) We feed animals saved from abandonment or slaughterhouse (à mettre au pluriel)
4) We regularly organize manifestations (mettre à la place: démonstrations) also (pas à la bonne place), so that people can become aware of their part in the exploitation of billions of animals
5) There are as many animals to rescue in Dunkirk as in Compiegne OK
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