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Message de lullelia posté le 22-02-2009 à 13:03:18 (S | E | F)
Voilà j'ai fait un texte où j'ai argumenté contre les écoles unisexes , pouvez-vous me corriger,svp s'il vous plaît ?
I have writen a text where I have argue against single-sex school, Can you correct me, Please ?
" I'm against of single-sex school because I think you can work as hard as in a mixed school. Even if girls more succeed when they study in Girls' classrooms. Indeed in England, schools which are in the top of the league table are single-sex schools specially girl's schools. Yet, in these classrooms there are a bad ambiance because girls are means between them. Dividing girls and boys widen the gender gap. I think is important to know the other gender since school. In addition, I prefer be friends with boys because they are less hypocritical and boring than girls. I would like my children to attend a mixed school.
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Modifié par bridg le 22-02-2009 13:19
Message de lullelia posté le 22-02-2009 à 13:03:18 (S | E | F)
Voilà j'ai fait un texte où j'ai argumenté contre les écoles unisexes , pouvez-vous me corriger,
I have writen a text where I have argue against single-sex school, Can you correct me, Please ?
" I'm against of single-sex school because I think you can work as hard as in a mixed school. Even if girls more succeed when they study in Girls' classrooms. Indeed in England, schools which are in the top of the league table are single-sex schools specially girl's schools. Yet, in these classrooms there are a bad ambiance because girls are means between them. Dividing girls and boys widen the gender gap. I think is important to know the other gender since school. In addition, I prefer be friends with boys because they are less hypocritical and boring than girls. I would like my children to attend a mixed school.
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Modifié par bridg le 22-02-2009 13:19
Réponse: Écoles (corrections) de azer3, postée le 22-02-2009 à 22:18:44 (S | E)
Bonjour,
voilà quelques corrections.
" I'm against
Vérifie la formulation de tes phrases.
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Modifié par azer3 le 22-02-2009 22:19
Bonne nuit.
Réponse: Écoles (corrections) de lullelia, postée le 23-02-2009 à 20:07:46 (S | E)
Merci, beaucoup
