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Message de magaliedu11 posté le 18-02-2009 à 10:44:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai fait une description d'une photo. Le sujet de la leçon est la culture de l'arme en Amérique. Pouvez-vous corriger les erreurs grossières que j'aurais pu commettresvp s'il vous plaît ? Je pense surtout à la description du père.
The document is a photo. We don't know the origin of this document. The subject is the gun culture.
The photographer takes the photo in a studio. It is in black and white. We can see a father who carries his baby. In another hand, he has a pistolet. It is the focal point because it is in the middle ground and it emphasizes value.
The man's face is very strong. His gaze is steel. He loos serious. He is self-assurance. We can say he is on self defence because he takes firmly his arm. He wears battle dress trousers.
We can imagine that the man wants to protect his family and he thinks that the best solution is to hold arm. Besides, he wants to iniate his baby to his idea.
Maybe he has accepted to have this photo taken and published to show that his opinion is the best and to encourage another follower as him.
Above all, to support the gun culture in the USA and to encourage the second ammendemant. Maybe he has the printing of to take the law into one's own hand.
The man's finger is not on the tigger because there is his baby next to it. It is dangerous.
The use of black and white for this photo is to reinfore the hardness of the father.
I think the man is llowed to do this photo to show his idea about the gun culture and it is all credit to him to want to protect his family.
However, he is irrsponsible to hold a gun next to his child's face. He doesn't must blurred rules. There's no point in doing to look barbaric for show his idea.
Je vous remercie pour votre aide.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-02-2009 10:50
Message de magaliedu11 posté le 18-02-2009 à 10:44:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai fait une description d'une photo. Le sujet de la leçon est la culture de l'arme en Amérique. Pouvez-vous corriger les erreurs grossières que j'aurais pu commettre
The document is a photo. We don't know the origin of this document. The subject is the gun culture.
The photographer takes the photo in a studio. It is in black and white. We can see a father who carries his baby. In another hand, he has a pistolet. It is the focal point because it is in the middle ground and it emphasizes value.
The man's face is very strong. His gaze is steel. He loos serious. He is self-assurance. We can say he is on self defence because he takes firmly his arm. He wears battle dress trousers.
We can imagine that the man wants to protect his family and he thinks that the best solution is to hold arm. Besides, he wants to iniate his baby to his idea.
Maybe he has accepted to have this photo taken and published to show that his opinion is the best and to encourage another follower as him.
Above all, to support the gun culture in the USA and to encourage the second ammendemant. Maybe he has the printing of to take the law into one's own hand.
The man's finger is not on the tigger because there is his baby next to it. It is dangerous.
The use of black and white for this photo is to reinfore the hardness of the father.
I think the man is llowed to do this photo to show his idea about the gun culture and it is all credit to him to want to protect his family.
However, he is irrsponsible to hold a gun next to his child's face. He doesn't must blurred rules. There's no point in doing to look barbaric for show his idea.
Je vous remercie pour votre aide.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-02-2009 10:50
Réponse: Description photo 'gun culture' de linsey34, postée le 18-02-2009 à 11:48:44 (S | E)
Dear Magalie,
en rouge les erreurs à corriger:
The document is a photo. We don't know the origin of this document. The subject is the gun culture.
à l'emploi de theThe photographer takes the photo in a studio.
Phrase à reformuler
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It is the focal point because it is in the middle ground and it emphasizes value.
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We can say he is on self defence à reformuler because he takes firmly his arm. adverbe à déplacer
He wears battle dress trousers.
temps à changer
We can imagine that the man wants to protect his family and he thinks that the best solution is to hold arm.
si singulier: déterminant
Besides, he wants to iniate his baby to his idea.
Maybe he has accepted to have this photo taken and published to show that his opinion is the best and to encourage another follower as him.
plutôt au pluriel
Above all, to support the
gun culture in the USA and to encourage the second ammendemant orthographe.Phrase incomplète: où est le sujet?
Maybe he has the printing of to
take the law into one's own hand.one's est à décliner selon le sujet !
The man's finger is not on the tigger orthographe because there is his baby next to it. It is dangerous.
The use of black and white for this photo is to reinfore the hardness of the father.
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I think the man is llowed orthographe to do this photo to show his idea about the
gun culture and it is all credit to him to want wanting to protect his family.However, he is irrsponsible orthographe to hold a gun next to his child's face. He
doesn't must blurred rules. There's no point in doing to look barbaric for show his idea. Traduction de "pour": FOR + NOM / TO + VERBE
Réponse: Description photo 'gun culture' de magaliedu11, postée le 18-02-2009 à 12:50:38 (S | E)
The document is a photo. We don't know the origin of this document. The subject is gun culture.
The photographer takes the photo in a studio. It is in black and white. We can see a father who is carring his baby. In other hand, he has an arm. It is the focal point because it is in the middle ground and it emphasizes value.
The man's face is very strong. His gaze is steel. He looks serious. He has a self-assurance. We can say he has a self defence because he takes his firmly arm. He is wearing battle dress trousers.
We can imagine that the man wants to protect his family and he thinks that the best solution is to hold arms. Besides, he wants to iniate his baby to his idea.
Maybe he has accepted to have this photo taken and published to show that his opinion is the best and to encourage other followers as him.
Above all, he has accepted because he has wanted to support gun culture in the USA and to encourage the second amendment. Maybe he has the printing to take the law into his own hand.
The man's finger is not on the trigger because there is his baby next to it. It is dangerous.
The use of black and white for this photo is to reinforce the hardness of the father.
I think the man is allowed to do this photo to show his idea about gun culture and it is all credit to him wanting to protect his family.
However, he is irresponsible to hold a gun next to his child's face. He doesn't must mistake the rules. There's no point in do to look like barbaric to show his idea.
Réponse: Description photo 'gun culture' de linsey34, postée le 18-02-2009 à 13:12:44 (S | E)
The photographer takes the photo in a studio.
Commence par "The photo..."
who is carring
à l'orthographeIn other hand
Quelles sont les deux expressions exactes?
He has a self-assurance.
il faut mettre l'adjectif
he takes his firmly arm.
adverbe à déplacer
Above all, he has accepted because he
He doesn't must mistake the rules.
must n'est pas un verbe !!in do to look
in + verbe en ING
tu mets deux verbes !!Réponse: Description photo 'gun culture' de magaliedu11, postée le 18-02-2009 à 17:53:26 (S | E)
The photo is taked in a studio.
who is carrying
in an other hand
he has of the assurance
he takes his arm firmly
he doesn't mistake the rules
in looking
Je ne suis pas trop sure.
Réponse: Description photo 'gun culture' de linsey34, postée le 18-02-2009 à 20:56:28 (S | E)
The photo is taked in a studio.
Verbe irrégulier On the one hand...
on the other hand...
he has of the assurance
He is self-assured
he doesn't mistake the rules
Que voulais-tu dire ici ?
Le reste est ok !
Réponse: Description photo 'gun culture' de intrepid34, postée le 19-02-2009 à 08:21:52 (S | E)
Good morning!
May I make a couple of suggestions to your description, please?
The photographer has taken the photo in a studio (ou bien à la voix passive - This photo has been taken in a studio.)
It is in black and white. We can see a man holding a baby in one arm, in his free hand there is a weapon. It is the focal point because it is in the centre of the photo.
The man's face has strong features and is gaze is steely and serious. He is self-assured. We could say that he is on the defence because he is holding the gun firmly and he is wearing regulation army trousers.
We can imagine that the man wants to protect his family and thinks he is doing so by carrying a weapon. Besides, he wants his child to get the idea right from the start.
Maybe he agreed to have this photo taken......... and encourage others to follow his example. Obviously he wishes to support gun culture in the USA and
the Second Amendment. Maybe he has the printing.....!! I don't understand this sentence - please clarify!!
Maybe he wants to take the law into his own hands?
The man's finger ................. because his baby is beside it and it's too dangerous.
The use ............. severity / austerity / of the father's features.
I think the man has posed for this photo to draw the reader's attention to the problems of gun culture in the USA. Americans want to protect their families and this is the only way they know how. However, ...............ok. But he mustn't misread the rules. There's no point in looking like a barbarian to show others that this kind of behaviour is acceptable.
Réponse: Description photo 'gun culture' de magaliedu11, postée le 19-02-2009 à 09:27:00 (S | E)
Je vous remercie pour votre aide et vos suggestions.
