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Message de choups971 posté le 28-10-2008 à 14:35:13 (S | E | F)
Bonjour!! Je suis nouvelle..J'aurais besoin de votre aide...
Il faut que je décrive une image que le professeur nous à donner..
Pouvez-vous corriger mes fautes de syntaxes ou autres. Et dire ce que vous en penser. Merci d'avance (200 words)
The type of document is a photograph taken from a film.The photograph is black and white. The title of picture is"Appointment with death". The scene takes places in a dining room.
To begin,there are three characters:a woman and two men.At the background,I can see,in the top right hand corner of picture,there is a big fireplace,and on the left of picture there is a lamp and a painting attract on the wall.In the middle of picture there is a table,where is put a lamp.On either side of table, there are chairs.At the background,behind the table,on the left, the woman is standing. She is white with skin colour and wearing a long dress.In from of table, a man is squatting.He is also white with skin colour and wearing a suit .In the foreground, to finish we can see the another man,who is stretch out .On the ground,the man is stretching out,he must be dead.The woman is looking to be anxious, the alive man is looking very thoughtful. the scene makes you want to know what happened. The title is very appropriate because with the title and in front of this scene,we can imagine what happened before this scene.
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Modifié par choups971 le 28-10-2008 14:35
Message de choups971 posté le 28-10-2008 à 14:35:13 (S | E | F)
Bonjour!! Je suis nouvelle..J'aurais besoin de votre aide...
Il faut que je décrive une image que le professeur nous à donner..
Pouvez-vous corriger mes fautes de syntaxes ou autres. Et dire ce que vous en penser. Merci d'avance (200 words)
The type of document is a photograph taken from a film.The photograph is black and white. The title of picture is"Appointment with death". The scene takes places in a dining room.
To begin,there are three characters:a woman and two men.At the background,I can see,in the top right hand corner of picture,there is a big fireplace,and on the left of picture there is a lamp and a painting attract on the wall.In the middle of picture there is a table,where is put a lamp.On either side of table, there are chairs.At the background,behind the table,on the left, the woman is standing. She is white with skin colour and wearing a long dress.In from of table, a man is squatting.He is also white with skin colour and wearing a suit .In the foreground, to finish we can see the another man,who is stretch out .On the ground,the man is stretching out,he must be dead.The woman is looking to be anxious, the alive man is looking very thoughtful. the scene makes you want to know what happened. The title is very appropriate because with the title and in front of this scene,we can imagine what happened before this scene.
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Modifié par choups971 le 28-10-2008 14:35
Réponse: Describe a picture de sweett, postée le 28-10-2008 à 16:36:40 (S | E)
bonjour choups! ta description est bien j'ai juste repérée une faute ce n'est pas the scene takes places mais the scene takes place voilà a+!
Réponse: Describe a picture de choups971, postée le 28-10-2008 à 16:42:11 (S | E)
Merci à vous..
Réponse: Describe a picture de wysiwyg, postée le 29-10-2008 à 21:14:32 (S | E)
bonne description mais
quelques améliorations , peut-être:
1- To begin with, = First,
2- in the background,
3- a painting (hanging) on the wall
4- a table with a lamp on it
5- in front of the table there is a man squatting
6- je ne comprends pas: white with with skin colour???
7- we can see another man lying on the floor, he must..
8- the woman looks worried
Best of luck!
Réponse: Describe a picture de choups971, postée le 30-10-2008 à 08:26:39 (S | E)
she is white with skin colour???
Elle est blanche de couleur de peau
Merci beaucoup
