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Message de nuyoricaine posté le 15-10-2008 à 14:51:59 (S | E | F)
bonjour je voudrais savoir si ce que j'ai écrit est juste.
i'm for joining a laughter club because the society lacks a sense of humour, people no longer laugh very often, we live in an era of shyness
I think it's very good because you escape stress of professional life and it's a new way of meeting other people apart from business partners. And to finish laughter is bebeficial for health.
I'm against joining a laughter club because in my opinion it's artificial.
Indeed laughter is natural and musn't be forced.
I can't see myself performing ridiculous exercices like chicken noises./ i'm not very fond of making a public spectacle of myself.
It's no proven medicinal qualities
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-10-2008 14:53
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Message de nuyoricaine posté le 15-10-2008 à 14:51:59 (S | E | F)
bonjour je voudrais savoir si ce que j'ai écrit est juste.
i'm for joining a laughter club because the society lacks a sense of humour, people no longer laugh very often, we live in an era of shyness
I think it's very good because you escape stress of professional life and it's a new way of meeting other people apart from business partners. And to finish laughter is bebeficial for health.
I'm against joining a laughter club because in my opinion it's artificial.
Indeed laughter is natural and musn't be forced.
I can't see myself performing ridiculous exercices like chicken noises./ i'm not very fond of making a public spectacle of myself.
It's no proven medicinal qualities
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-10-2008 14:53
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Réponse: Join a club de laure95, postée le 16-10-2008 à 10:20:36 (S | E)
Bonjour, voici ce que tu dois corriger,
- because the society lacks a sense of humour
- people no longer laugh very often: chosis entre NO LONGER et VERY OFTEN.
- an era
- stress: the stress.
- a public spectacle of myself.
- It's no proven medicinal qualities.
