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Message de gere posté le 16-06-2008 à 17:58:48 (S | E | F)
Bonjour seriez vous y jeter un coup d'oeuil pour mon oral d'Anglais. C'est ma première année d'Anglais(il aura peut-être beaucoup de fautes)
My name is Gérémy xxxxxxxx . I am fourteen. My address is xxxxxxxxxxxx. I measure 1m60. I go to school by car. I live in Anvaing. My phone number is xxxxxxxxxxxx My school is Centre Educatif Saint Pierre . I was born on may the first in nineteen ninety-three. I have short and chestnut brown hair. I like computing . I have one sister. I practise football three times a week.
I go to school in Leuze. My favourite subjects are Deutsch and English! My favourite day is Tuesday because I have gymnastics. This is super. My hobby is football. I practise football three times a week. I wear jeans, a jacket and a T-shirt.
Every morning I wake up at 6.30am . After I had breakfast. I have a shower. Every Monday I have 2 hours of French, 2 hours of science, one our of maths. I have one hour of Deutsch, one hour of religion. After my subject I go one hours to the study hall . At 7:50 am I go to school by car. I have eight subjects. At 4:20 pm I come back home. I study until up to 7 o’clock. Afterwards I watch TV or I play football. I go to bed at 9 pm .
I drink to like to some water. As dessert I eat to like to an ice cream. In a restaurant I drink coca. I eat chips with a beefsteak and salad.
My house is spacious and very comfortable. On the groundfloor there are a kitchen next to the office, a bathroom with a toilet and then a beautiful livingroom with a sofa and Tv.
On the second floor there are two bedrooms.
My best friend is Julian. He live in Leuze and he is 15 years as me. He goes at school in Leuze. He is in my class. Last weekend I plaied football, I studied and I help my ouders.
My favourite sport are football en tennis.
To go to my grandmother. I have to take the first one right, to go straight on and on the roundabout , to take the second right.
To me the weather is beautiful. The sun shines.
Un grand merci....
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Modifié par felin le 16-06-2008 19:10
Bonjour,Ne donnez jamais votre coordonnée sur internet
.Merci de votre compréhension
Message de gere posté le 16-06-2008 à 17:58:48 (S | E | F)
Bonjour seriez vous y jeter un coup d'oeuil pour mon oral d'Anglais. C'est ma première année d'Anglais(il aura peut-être beaucoup de fautes)
My name is Gérémy xxxxxxxx . I am fourteen. My address is xxxxxxxxxxxx. I measure 1m60. I go to school by car. I live in Anvaing. My phone number is xxxxxxxxxxxx My school is Centre Educatif Saint Pierre . I was born on may the first in nineteen ninety-three. I have short and chestnut brown hair. I like computing . I have one sister. I practise football three times a week.
I go to school in Leuze. My favourite subjects are Deutsch and English! My favourite day is Tuesday because I have gymnastics. This is super. My hobby is football. I practise football three times a week. I wear jeans, a jacket and a T-shirt.
Every morning I wake up at 6.30am . After I had breakfast. I have a shower. Every Monday I have 2 hours of French, 2 hours of science, one our of maths. I have one hour of Deutsch, one hour of religion. After my subject I go one hours to the study hall . At 7:50 am I go to school by car. I have eight subjects. At 4:20 pm I come back home. I study until up to 7 o’clock. Afterwards I watch TV or I play football. I go to bed at 9 pm .
I drink to like to some water. As dessert I eat to like to an ice cream. In a restaurant I drink coca. I eat chips with a beefsteak and salad.
My house is spacious and very comfortable. On the groundfloor there are a kitchen next to the office, a bathroom with a toilet and then a beautiful livingroom with a sofa and Tv.
On the second floor there are two bedrooms.
My best friend is Julian. He live in Leuze and he is 15 years as me. He goes at school in Leuze. He is in my class. Last weekend I plaied football, I studied and I help my ouders.
My favourite sport are football en tennis.
To go to my grandmother. I have to take the first one right, to go straight on and on the roundabout , to take the second right.
To me the weather is beautiful. The sun shines.
Un grand merci....
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Modifié par felin le 16-06-2008 19:10
Bonjour,Ne donnez jamais votre coordonnée sur internet
.Merci de votre compréhensionRéponse: gérémy expression de pumpkin21, postée le 16-06-2008 à 18:39:52 (S | E)
My name is Gérémy Bourgois . I am fourteen. I go to school by BUS. I live in Anvaing. My school is Centre Educatif Saint Pierre . I was born on may the first in nineteen HUNDRED ninety-three. I have short and chestnut brown hair. I like computing . I have one sister. I practise football three times a week.
I go to school in Leuze. My favourite subjects are GERMAN and English! My favourite day is Tuesday because I have gymnastics. This is COOL. My hobby is football. I practise football three times a week. I wear jeans, a jacket and a T-shirt.
Every morning I wake up at 6.30am . After I had breakfast. I have a shower. Every Monday I have 2 hours of French, 2 hours of science, one our of maths. I have one hour of GERMAN, one hour of religion. After my subject I go one hour
As dessert I LIKE TO EAT ice cream. In a restaurant I drink coLa. I eat chips with a beefsteak and salad.
My house is spacious and very comfortable. On the groundfloor there are a kitchen next to the office, a bathroom with a toilet and then a beautiful livingroom with a sofa and Tv.
On the second floor there are two bedrooms.
My best friend is Julian. He live in Leuze and he is 15 years as me. He goes at school in Leuze. He is in my class. Last weekend I plaYed football, I studied and I help my ouders. ?
My favourite sportS are football AND tennis.
To go to my grandmother. I have to take the first one right, to go straight on and on the round about , to take the second right.
To me the weather is beautiful. The sun shines.
Revois la construction de ta phrase.
GRAND conseil : Ne mets jamais tes coordonnées sur internet.
Réponse: gérémy expression de hoger, postée le 16-06-2008 à 19:26:39 (S | E)
Je pense d'avoir déjà corrigé cela – est-ce possible ? Si c'est le cas, as-tu lu ma réponse ? Si non, vaut-il la peine de la refaire ?
Bon, soit ( pour cette fois-ci ):
- 1m60
- –> 1.60 m
- I was born on may the first
innineteen ninety-three. - En gros, c'est la façon de prononcer la date ( en américain !); par écrit c'est "I was born on May 1st, 1993."
- My favourite subjects are Deutsch and English!
- "Deutsch" n'est pas un mot anglais.
- My favourite subjects are … / After my subject …
- Remplace "subject(s)" par "lesson(s)".
- one our of maths
- N'y aurait-il pas une faute d'orthographe ici ? Le mot "our" veut dire "notre".
- After I had breakfast.
- Ça veut plutôt dire "après avoir déjeuné", et non "après, j'ai déjeuné"; "after" est obligatoirement suivi par une indication du temps de quelque sorte : "après le déjeuner / cela / …", "après" tout court est "then", "afterwards", "later" ou quelque chose dans le genre.
Autre problème : Fais attention à l'emploi des temps ; tu vas du présent au passé et après de nouveau au présent ; pourquoi ? - one hours
- = une heures
- I drink to like
tosome water. As dessert I eat to liketoan ice cream. - "I drink to like" / "I eat to like" = "je mange bien aimer" / "je bois bien aimer" – et pas de "to" après …
"asdessert" –> "for dessert" - chips with a beefsteak
- "chips with beefsteak" ( pas d'article )
- there are a kitchen
- "are" = pluriel, "a kitchen" = singulier
- he is 15 years as me
- Mieux : "like me, he is 15 years old" ou bien : "he is 15 years old just like me"
- I plaied football
- Orthographe !
- He goes at school
- Préposition !
- ouders
- Ce n'est pas un mot anglais.
- My favourite sport are football en tennis.
- "sport" = singulier, "are" = pluriel ; "en" n'est pas un mot anglais.
- To go to my grandmother. I have to take the first one right
- Ponctuation ! – "le premier" quoi ?
- To me the weather is beautiful.
- Pourquoi "pour moi "?
- The sun shines.
- À réviser : présent simple vs. présent continu !
