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My favourite season (correction)
Message de rajaahdr posté le 27-12-2007 à 20:16:30 (S | E | F | I)
Bonsoir tout le monde,
J'ai une production à faire en anglais pour demain matin concernant ce sujet : "Quelle est ta saison préférée, et dis pourquoi."
Je suis encore débutante en anglais, j'ai essayé de faire un petit paragraphe et j'aimerais bien qu'on me le corrige (Fautes d'orthographe, vocabulaire, conjugaisons, bref, tout ^^) Le voici:
" My favorite season is summer because We have enough time to travel. The weather is gorgeous,I love going to the beach on a hot day and i love watching the sun rise over the ocean. I like to eat a ice cream every day, and drink cold liquids.
I love summer because we have three months to do as I please without going to school
We can wear short clothes and enjoy each moment. We leave a Lot with our friends.
We are all a lot of fun and we resting after a long year of studies ongoing "
Merci d'avance !
Rajaa,
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Modifié par bridg le 27-12-2007 20:17
Message de rajaahdr posté le 27-12-2007 à 20:16:30 (S | E | F | I)
Bonsoir tout le monde,
J'ai une production à faire en anglais pour demain matin concernant ce sujet : "Quelle est ta saison préférée, et dis pourquoi."
Je suis encore débutante en anglais, j'ai essayé de faire un petit paragraphe et j'aimerais bien qu'on me le corrige (Fautes d'orthographe, vocabulaire, conjugaisons, bref, tout ^^) Le voici:
" My favorite season is summer because We have enough time to travel. The weather is gorgeous,I love going to the beach on a hot day and i love watching the sun rise over the ocean. I like to eat a ice cream every day, and drink cold liquids.
I love summer because we have three months to do as I please without going to school
We can wear short clothes and enjoy each moment. We leave a Lot with our friends.
We are all a lot of fun and we resting after a long year of studies ongoing "
Merci d'avance !
Rajaa,
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Modifié par bridg le 27-12-2007 20:17
Réponse: My favourite season (correction) de lucile83, postée le 27-12-2007 à 21:21:57 (S | E)
Hello,
" My favourite season is summer because we have enough time to travel. The weather is gorgeous,I love going to the beach on a hot day and i
love watching the sun rise over the ocean. I like to eat a ice cream every day, and drink cold liquids.I love summer because we have three months to do as I please...
phrase bancale,à refaire..... without going to schoolWe can wear short
clothes and enjoy each moment. We leave a lot with our friends.We are all a lot of fun and we resting after a long year of studies ongoing "
là aussi, phrase à refaire,je ne comprends pas.See you
