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Message de chounette37 posté le 30-09-2007 à 13:29:18 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour, je dois faire une lettre comme si j'écrivais à un correspondant en anglais et je voulais savoir si vous pouviez me dire s'il y a des fautes. Merci d'avance.
Hello,
My name is Sophie H****** and I've 15 years. My birthday is the twenty November. I live in Tours, 1 place P***** A*****. I've got a cat : Chouky. My parents are divorced and I live at my mother's. I've got chestnut's hair and blue's eyes. I love shopping, swimming, hanging out with my friends and reading people magazine and novels. I listen all types of music as rock, rnb, reggae... I skate artistic for 4 years, I like very much it but I have hardly of time to make it because I have to learn my lessons and do my homework. My school is C******, I study French, English, history, math...I begin the lessons generally in 8.00 a.m and I finish in 17.15 p.m. Last week, we elected two persons as delegates: Marie and Justine.
And you ?
Sophie.
Ps: j'ai mis des * pour garder un minimum de confidentialité.. Merci de votre compréhension.
Message de chounette37 posté le 30-09-2007 à 13:29:18 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour, je dois faire une lettre comme si j'écrivais à un correspondant en anglais et je voulais savoir si vous pouviez me dire s'il y a des fautes. Merci d'avance.
Hello,
My name is Sophie H****** and I've 15 years. My birthday is the twenty November. I live in Tours, 1 place P***** A*****. I've got a cat : Chouky. My parents are divorced and I live at my mother's. I've got chestnut's hair and blue's eyes. I love shopping, swimming, hanging out with my friends and reading people magazine and novels. I listen all types of music as rock, rnb, reggae... I skate artistic for 4 years, I like very much it but I have hardly of time to make it because I have to learn my lessons and do my homework. My school is C******, I study French, English, history, math...I begin the lessons generally in 8.00 a.m and I finish in 17.15 p.m. Last week, we elected two persons as delegates: Marie and Justine.
And you ?
Sophie.
Ps: j'ai mis des * pour garder un minimum de confidentialité.. Merci de votre compréhension.
Réponse: Correction d'une présentation de nick27, postée le 30-09-2007 à 13:56:06 (S | E)
Hello!
Je mets en rouge ce que tu dois modifier
My name is Sophie H****** and I've 15 years --- . My birthday is --- the twenty November. I live in Tours, 1 place P***** A*****. I've got a cat : Chouky. My parents are divorced and I live at my mother's. I've got chestnut's hair and blue's eyes. I love shopping, swimming, hanging out with my friends and reading people magazineX and novels. I listen --- all types of music such as rock, rnb, reggae... I skate artistic for 4 years, I like very much it but I have hardly of time to make it because I have to learn my lessons and do my homework. My school is C******, I study French, English, history, math...I begin the lessons generally in 8.00 a.m and I finish in 17.15 p.m. Last week, we elected two persons as delegates: Marie and Justine.
Il y a des erreurs de grammaire et de constructions de phrases surtout.
Bonne chance
Réponse: Correction d'une présentation de chounette37, postée le 30-09-2007 à 13:57:15 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup pour cette réponse : je vais travailler dessus =D
