Let's suggest 91/Taking it easy 37
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Message de here4u posté le 03-08-2025 à 21:47:28 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!
Another easy exercice that everyone can do!
Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement ) Vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux "!
Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :
1) 'HOLIDAY': what images does the word conjure up in your minds?
2) Do you think money can cure any evil?
3) Brothers and sisters: best friends? or enemies?
4) Do you think you could forgive anything?
Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois le premier texte corrigé au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !
Cet exercice sera pour vous un
ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...
Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !)le mercredi 13 août 2025 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.
Message de here4u posté le 03-08-2025 à 21:47:28 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!
Another easy exercice that everyone can do!
Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement ) Vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas...
Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux "
!Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :
1) 'HOLIDAY': what images does the word conjure up in your minds?
2) Do you think money can cure any evil?
3) Brothers and sisters: best friends? or enemies?
4) Do you think you could forgive anything?
Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois le premier texte corrigé au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !
Cet exercice sera pour vous un
ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !)le mercredi 13 août 2025 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.
Réponse : Let's suggest 91/Taking it easy 37 de here4u, postée le 05-08-2025 à 09:53:21 (S | E)
Hello dears,
ANSWER A: 'HOLIDAY': what images does the word conjure up in your minds?
please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.
First, I think of my holidays, when I was a little girl. Each year we visited our paternal grandparents in the South. I really liked them and I remember my sisters and I running up the stairs when we arrived They were affectionate, funny, and relaxed. My grand mother was an outstanding cook and each of us in the family was feeling good with them. It was our vacation.
Later, when I was a mother, my parents welcomed my husband, my children and I in their house. We could go to the swimming pool, go cycling, and read books whenever we wanted, and every one could have a rest?Maybe not my parents, but they never complained ! It was so good !
Nowadays, I am a grandmother, I like to see my children relax at my house, while my grandchildren have fun and see their cousins. Holiday is all that for me.
Thanks for your help! Réponse : Let's suggest 91/Taking it easy 37 de gerold, postée le 08-08-2025 à 22:05:37 (S | E)
Hello!
ANSWER A: 'HOLIDAY': what images does the word conjure up in your minds?
please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.
My remarks:
First, I think of my holidays, when I was a little girl. Each year we visited our paternal grandparents in the South. I really liked them and I remember my sisters and I running up the stairs when we arrived xx They were affectionate, funny, and relaxed. My grand mother was an outstanding cook and each of us in the family was feeling good with them. It was our vacation
.Later, when I was a mother, my parents welcomed my husband, my children and I in their house. We could go to the swimming pool, go cycling, and read books whenever we wanted xx, and every one could have a rest?Maybe not my parents, but they never complained ! It was so good !
Nowadays, I am a grandmother, I like to see my children relax at my house, while my grandchildren have fun and see their cousins. Holiday is all that for me.
Réponse : Let's suggest 91/Taking it easy 37 de here4u, postée le 09-08-2025 à 15:40:53 (S | E)
Hello, dear friends!
Merci à Gerold pour ses 'indications'. J'ai reçu une proposition d'amélioration en mp. La voici :
Let's suggest 91/Taking it easy 37: ANSWER A: 'HOLIDAY': what images does the word conjure up in your minds?
Merci à Gerold pour ses remarques. Voici ce que je propose comme corrections. J'ai sûrement laissé des fautes, mais quel bon exercice !
First, I think of my holidays, when I was a little girl. Each year we visited our paternal grandparents in the South. I really liked them and I remember my sisters and me running up the stairs when we arrived at. They were affectionate, funny, and relaxed. My grandmother was an outstanding cook and each of us in the family was feeling good with them. This is what our holidays were.
Later, when I was a mother, my parents welcomed my husband, my children and me in their house. We could go to the swimming pool, go cycling, and read books whenever we wanted to, and everyone could have a rest. Maybe not my parents, but they never complained.
It was so nice !
Nowadays, I am a grandmother, I like to see my children relaxed at my house, while my grandchildren have fun and see their cousins. Holiday is all that for me.
Merci de vérifier. Je vais le faire aussi.
Réponse : Let's suggest 91/Taking it easy 37 de here4u, postée le 09-08-2025 à 15:52:28 (S | E)
Hello dears,
Here I am again!
Let's suggest 91/Taking it easy 37: ANSWER A: 'HOLIDAY': what images does the word conjure up in your minds?
My indications:
First, I think of my holidays, when I was a little girl. Each year we visited our paternal grandparents in the South. I really liked them and I remember my sisters and me running up the stairs when we arrived at. They were affectionate, funny, and relaxed. My grandmother was an outstanding cook and each of us in the family was feeling good with them. This is what our holidays were.
Later, when I was a mother, my parents welcomed my husband, my children and me in their house. We could go to the swimming pool, go cycling, and read books whenever we wanted to, and everyone could have a rest. Maybe not my parents, but they never complained.
It was so nice !(not clear? Was it nice because your parents never complained?)
Nowadays, I am a grandmother, I like to see my children relaxed at my house, while my grandchildren have fun and see their cousins. Holiday is all that for me.
A very good text! Well done!
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Réponse : Let's suggest 91/Taking it easy 37 de gerold, postée le 09-08-2025 à 17:02:00 (S | E)
Hello!
Let's suggest 91/Taking it easy 37: ANSWER A: 'HOLIDAY': what images does the word conjure up in your minds?
Merci à Gerold pour ses remarques. Voici ce que je propose comme corrections. J'ai sûrement laissé des fautes, mais quel bon exercice !
First, I think of my holidays, when I was a little girl. Each year we visited our paternal grandparents in the South. I really liked them and I remember my sisters and me (would "me and my sisters" be better?) running up the stairs when we arrived
Later, when I was (became?) a mother, my parents welcomed my husband, my children and me in their house. We could go to the swimming pool, go cycling, and read books whenever we wanted to, and everyone could have a rest. Maybe not my parents, but they never complained.
It was so nice! (no space before "!")
Nowadays, I am a grandmother, I like to see my children relaxing at my house, while my grandchildren have fun and see/meet their cousins. Holiday is all that for me.
Réponse : Let's suggest 91/Taking it easy 37 de alouettelulu, postée le 09-08-2025 à 20:19:12 (S | E)
Let's suggest 91/Taking it easy 37: ANSWER A: 'HOLIDAY': what images does the word conjure up in your minds?
En suivant les indications de Gerold, voici mes corrections. Mais je n’ai pas corrigé « my sisters and me « , ne voyant pas trop où est ma faute.
First, I think of my holidays, when I was a little girl. Each year we visited our paternal grandparents in the South. I really liked them and I remember my sisters and me (would "me and my sisters" be better?) running up the stairs when we arrived. They were affectionate, funny, and relaxed. My grandmother was an outstanding cook and each of us in the family was feeling good with them. This is what our holidays were.
Later, when I became a mother, my parents welcomed my husband, my children and me in their house. We could go to the swimming pool, go cycling, and read books whenever we wanted to, and everyone could have a rest. Maybe not my parents, but they never complained.
It was so nice!
Nowadays, I am a grandmother, I like to see my children relaxing at my house, while my grandchildren have fun and meet their cousins. Holiday is all that for me.
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Modifié par alouettelulu le 09-08-2025 20:19
Réponse : Let's suggest 91/Taking it easy 37 de here4u, postée le 11-08-2025 à 16:20:24 (S | E)
My 'last' indications...
First, I think of my holidays, when I was a little girl. Each year we visited our paternal grandparents in the South. I really liked them and I remember my sisters and me (would "me and my sisters" be better? not really) running up the stairs when we arrived. They were affectionate, (Who's they?) funny, and relaxed. My grandmother was an outstanding cook and each of us in the family was feeling good with them. This is what our holidays were.
Later, when I became a mother, my parents welcomed my husband, my children and me in their house. We could go to the swimming pool, go cycling, and read books whenever we wanted to, and everyone could have a rest. Maybe not my parents, but they never complained.(I understand what you mean, but it's not well-said.)
It was so nice!
Nowadays, I am a grandmother, I like to see my children relaxing at my house, while my grandchildren have fun and meet their cousins. Holiday is all that for me.
A very good text.
Réponse : Let's suggest 91/Taking it easy 37 de alouettelulu, postée le 12-08-2025 à 07:43:15 (S | E)
Ma tentative pour corriger mes fautes :
First, I think of my holidays, when I was a little girl. Each year we visited our paternal grandparents in the South. I really liked them and I remember me and my sisters running up the stairs when we arrived. Both were affectionate, funny, and relaxed people. My grandmother was an outstanding cook and each of us in the family was feeling good with them. This is what our holidays were.
Later, when I became a mother, my parents welcomed my husband, me and my children in their house. We could go to the swimming pool, go cycling, and read books whenever we wanted to. Except for my parents, who never complained, everyone could rest.
It was so nice!
Nowadays, I am a grandmother, I like to see my children relaxing at my house, while my grandchildren have fun and meet their cousins. Holiday is all that for me.
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