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Message de miguel1260 posté le 06-12-2009 à 22:11:23 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir à tous
J'aurais besoin de votre aide afin de corriger un texte, le contexte: je suis à Las Vegas depuis peu pour travailler, et je lui raconte 2 expériences que j ai faites depuis que j y suis.
MERCI BEAUCOUP(S)
Hey Mike,
How are you doing ? Hope you’re fine.
For me here every things are doing well, I really enjoy to be there, people are very friendly. My new work place it’s good, I have to to do a lot of hours but I really enjoy it and my colleague are very and kind to me.
I visited almost all most famous casino, they are so big, I lost my self once in one of the biggest one. Could you imagine that, I seen a lion on MGM casino.
And last night with one of my friend I saw a UFC fight show (it’s like a boxing fight, but they can do any kick). I was shocked by the power of the knocks. And yes, I thought of you, I took a lot of pictures like that I can send you some of theme.
Ho!!! I'didn't tell you, I have been on the Gran Canyon, it was amazing. I took the helicopter to fly around the most beautiful site.
But it so sad to to do all thise things without you, once you should come over there to have some fun together.
Take care of you my friend, say Hey to everybody.
Miss you
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Modifié par bridg le 06-12-2009 22:16
Seconde demande retirée, nous ne corrigeons que ce que nous voyons.
Titre
Message de miguel1260 posté le 06-12-2009 à 22:11:23 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir à tous
J'aurais besoin de votre aide afin de corriger un texte, le contexte: je suis à Las Vegas depuis peu pour travailler, et je lui raconte 2 expériences que j ai faites depuis que j y suis.
MERCI BEAUCOUP
Hey Mike,
How are you doing ? Hope you’re fine.
For me here every things are doing well, I really enjoy to be there, people are very friendly. My new work place it’s good, I have to to do a lot of hours but I really enjoy it and my colleague are very and kind to me.
I visited almost all most famous casino, they are so big, I lost my self once in one of the biggest one. Could you imagine that, I seen a lion on MGM casino.
And last night with one of my friend I saw a UFC fight show (it’s like a boxing fight, but they can do any kick). I was shocked by the power of the knocks. And yes, I thought of you, I took a lot of pictures like that I can send you some of theme.
Ho!!! I'didn't tell you, I have been on the Gran Canyon, it was amazing. I took the helicopter to fly around the most beautiful site.
But it so sad to to do all thise things without you, once you should come over there to have some fun together.
Take care of you my friend, say Hey to everybody.
Miss you
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Modifié par bridg le 06-12-2009 22:16
Seconde demande retirée, nous ne corrigeons que ce que nous voyons.
Titre
Réponse: Las Vegas/Correction de seb06000, postée le 06-12-2009 à 22:23:06 (S | E)
bonsoir,
voici les éventuelles corrections:
" How are you doing ? Hope you’re fine.
For me here every things ( every et thing accolés) are (il faut le singulier) doing well, I really enjoy to be there, people are very friendly. My new work place it’s ( la répétition du sujet le....c'est est propre au français) good, I have to to do a lot of hours but I really enjoy it and my colleague (pluriel) are very and kind to me.
I visited almost all most (il manque un déterminant) famous casino ( pluriel) , they are so big, I lost my self ( my et self sont accolés) once in one of the biggest one. Could you imagine that, I seen ( temps) a lion on MGM casino.
And last night with one of my friend I saw a UFC fight show (it’s like a boxing fight, but they can do any kick). I was shocked by the power of the knocks. And yes, I thought of (erreur de préposition) you, I took a lot of pictures like that I can send you some of theme (ortho) .
Ho!!! I'didn't tell you, I have been on the Gran Canyon, it was amazing. I took the helicopter to fly around the most beautiful site.
But it so sad to to do all thise (ortho) things without you, once you should come over there to have some fun together.
Take care of you my friend, say Hey to everybody.
quand à 'rajouter du texte' ce n'est pas notre travail mais le votre! nous corrigerons avec plaisir!!
Bonne soirée
Amicalement
sébastien
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