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Correction/crazy about cooking
Message de pierro53200 posté le 20-10-2009 à 19:34:31 (S | E | F)
bonjour
je suis en 3eme
pouvez-vous me dire si j'ai des fautes ou si je peux améliorer des passages
la consigne est de parler d'une personne qui est passionnée, en 100 mots
Joeffrey is crazy about cooking because is fond of eating good meals and making discover of new flavour to his family
He coocks five hours a week alone at home for his family for dinner
He has a little outfit because he start not long ago will he going to buy it
He enjoys looking programme of cooking to learn new recipes
He havn't got an idole whereras he admire the starry chief
First he going to a school cook because he want to be a cook
After thathe want to creat his restaurant
He mad about cooking orloff roast because it's his favourite dish
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-10-2009 19:37
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Message de pierro53200 posté le 20-10-2009 à 19:34:31 (S | E | F)
bonjour
je suis en 3eme
pouvez-vous me dire si j'ai des fautes ou si je peux améliorer des passages
la consigne est de parler d'une personne qui est passionnée, en 100 mots
Joeffrey is crazy about cooking because is fond of eating good meals and making discover of new flavour to his family
He coocks five hours a week alone at home for his family for dinner
He has a little outfit because he start not long ago will he going to buy it
He enjoys looking programme of cooking to learn new recipes
He havn't got an idole whereras he admire the starry chief
First he going to a school cook because he want to be a cook
After thathe want to creat his restaurant
He mad about cooking orloff roast because it's his favourite dish
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-10-2009 19:37
+titre+forum
Réponse: Correction/crazy about cooking de laure95, postée le 21-10-2009 à 11:02:39 (S | E)
Bonjour, voici ce que tu dois corriger:
Joeffrey is crazy about cooking because he is fond of eating good meals and making discover
He coocks (orthographe) five hours a week alone at home for his family for dinner
He has a little outfit because he start (prétérit + AGO) not long time ago will he going to buy it ?
He enjoys looking (pas le bon verbe pour regarder la télé) programme (à mettre au pluriel) of cooking to learn new recipes
He havn't (revoir la 3è personne du singulier de HAVE) got an idole (orthographe) whereras he admire (conjugaison) the starry chief
First he going (à quel temps as-tu voulu conjuguer GO?) to a school cook because he want (conjugaison) to be a cook
After thathe want (même remarque) to creat his restaurant
He is mad about cooking orloff roast because it's his favourite dish
Attention à la conjugaison!
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