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Correction d'un poème
Message de roxaneeeeee posté le 07-06-2009 à 19:13:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, et merci d'avance pour votre aide :D
Il s'agit d' Je dois écrire un poème présentant de "fausses" excuses. Voici mon texte.
Thanks for your correction
This is just to say
I have borrowed
The bestseller
That was on your beside table
and I which
You wanted to read before putting to sleep you
Forgive me
It was tempting
So compelling
And so fascinating
I promise
I would return it to you when I would have read it
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Modifié par kolimang le 07-06-2009 21:35
Message de roxaneeeeee posté le 07-06-2009 à 19:13:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, et merci d'avance pour votre aide :D
Thanks for your correction
This is just to say
I have borrowed
The bestseller
That was on your beside table
and I which
You wanted to read before putting to sleep you
Forgive me
It was tempting
So compelling
And so fascinating
I promise
I would return it to you when I would have read it
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Modifié par kolimang le 07-06-2009 21:35
Réponse: Correction d'un poème de chrislondon, postée le 07-06-2009 à 21:43:48 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Your poem is very good.There are just a couple of things to correct.
'and I which you wanted to read...' 'I' is not necessary.
'before putting to sleep you'...before going to sleep.
'I promise I would return it when I would have read it.' You need to use the future in the first part and the present perfect in the second part and not the conditional perfect.
Best Wishes
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Modifié par chrislondon le 07-06-2009 21:44
Réponse: Correction d'un poème de roxaneeeeee, postée le 08-06-2009 à 10:22:49 (S | E)
Hello
Thank you so much
I will return it as soon as I read it
est ce juste ?
merci d'avance
