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Message de popov123 posté le 12-05-2009 à 20:25:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour àtoutes et à tous,
Voilà pour mes examens fin d'année et je dois préparer des textes. Pouvez-vous m'aider afin de retrouver mes erreurs?
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide!!!
Scientist are shocked by then research which show that more than 88000 people have died in Europe over the last 20 years as a result of extreme weather conditions and climate disasters. The countries which are the worst affected by global warming are Italy and Germany, recording major damage due to floods and storms. In January alone this years, storms in southern Europe killed at least 25 persons and ran up costs of over 750millions.
Half a million families across Belgium turned off their lights on Saturday, March 28 for Earth hour. The families have done that to show their solidarity with the initiative to send a message to world leaders to get serious about global warming.
To decrease the pollution, twelve EU nations offer the possibility to the population to trade in their old polluting vehicle and get a government bonus to buy a new “cleaner one…
Another problem in the world is the fishing. For example, the bluefin tuna is endangered. The WWF association say every year that the annual catch should be limited to 15 000 tonnes but the fisherman dismissed the recommendation. According to group WWF, the bluefin breeding population will be wiped out by 2012 if fishing carries on at this rate.
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Modifié par bridg le 12-05-2009 20:29
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Message de popov123 posté le 12-05-2009 à 20:25:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour àtoutes et à tous,
Voilà pour mes examens fin d'année et je dois préparer des textes. Pouvez-vous m'aider afin de retrouver mes erreurs?
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide!!!
Scientist are shocked by then research which show that more than 88000 people have died in Europe over the last 20 years as a result of extreme weather conditions and climate disasters. The countries which are the worst affected by global warming are Italy and Germany, recording major damage due to floods and storms. In January alone this years, storms in southern Europe killed at least 25 persons and ran up costs of over 750millions.
Half a million families across Belgium turned off their lights on Saturday, March 28 for Earth hour. The families have done that to show their solidarity with the initiative to send a message to world leaders to get serious about global warming.
To decrease the pollution, twelve EU nations offer the possibility to the population to trade in their old polluting vehicle and get a government bonus to buy a new “cleaner one…
Another problem in the world is the fishing. For example, the bluefin tuna is endangered. The WWF association say every year that the annual catch should be limited to 15 000 tonnes but the fisherman dismissed the recommendation. According to group WWF, the bluefin breeding population will be wiped out by 2012 if fishing carries on at this rate.
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Modifié par bridg le 12-05-2009 20:29
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Réponse: climate disasters/Correction de intrepid34, postée le 13-05-2009 à 08:17:31 (S | E)
Good morning Popov!
Very good in fact excellent! I think your only mistakes may be typing errors? Here they are :
Line 3 No "s" on - year - and 750 million
Line 4 "Earth Hour" The households did that to show (preterite)
Not bad on the whole - well done!
Intrepid
Réponse: climate disasters/Correction de taconnet, postée le 13-05-2009 à 09:39:39 (S | E)
Bonjour.
Dans cette phrase " worst" est adverbe : c'est le superlatif de "badly"
The worst affected countries by global warming are ...
ou alors vous pouvez dire :
The countries which are affected the most by....
Réponse: climate disasters/Correction de popov123, postée le 16-05-2009 à 14:00:09 (S | E)
Un grand merci a tout les deux, désolé de répondre si tard, j'ai eu quelques problèmes.
Bon week-end
