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La voix active et la voix passive
Message de auror3 posté le 04-04-2009 à 09:57:59 (S | E | F)
Bonjour je dois travailler un texte en anglais et j'aimerais savoir si ce que j'ai fait est correct s'il vous plaît
Voici mon texte, donc ce qui est en vert correspond à de la voix passive et ce qui est en rouge correspond à de la voix active.
In the third world, each year, thousand of children are exploited by unscrupulous employers. Some of them are forced to work under threat of violence. Susan Loader has decided to help a child and his family in Kenya throuh sponsorship.
"Busumabu was five when he was sent to an orphanage after his parents has died. when I first met him, he was underweight. Now he is a heatly child of twelve. He is being looked after by relatives. He goes to school four days a week. He's been given what he most needed: education and a family. I was sent a photo of him last month: he looked cheerful and hopeful."
Other children like Busumabu could be helped through sponsorship. If we all did something, thousands of lives would be saved each year.
Voilà pourriez-vous me dire si c'est correct s'il vous plaît Merci.
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Modifié par mariebru le 04-04-2009 10:15
Message de auror3 posté le 04-04-2009 à 09:57:59 (S | E | F)
Bonjour je dois travailler un texte en anglais et j'aimerais savoir si ce que j'ai fait est correct s'il vous plaît
Voici mon texte, donc ce qui est en vert correspond à de la voix passive et ce qui est en rouge correspond à de la voix active.
In the third world, each year, thousand of children are exploited by unscrupulous employers. Some of them are forced to work under threat of violence. Susan Loader has decided to help a child and his family in Kenya throuh sponsorship.
"Busumabu was five when he was sent to an orphanage after his parents has died. when I first met him, he was underweight. Now he is a heatly child of twelve. He is being looked after by relatives. He goes to school four days a week. He's been given what he most needed: education and a family. I was sent a photo of him last month: he looked cheerful and hopeful."
Other children like Busumabu could be helped through sponsorship. If we all did something, thousands of lives would be saved each year.
Voilà pourriez-vous me dire si c'est correct s'il vous plaît Merci.
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Modifié par mariebru le 04-04-2009 10:15
Réponse: La voix active et la voix passive de jean31, postée le 04-04-2009 à 10:51:29 (S | E)
Bonjour,
...has decided …had died (past perfect car action antérieure au passé)… needed… sont à la voix active et devraient donc être en rouge.
Attention à l'orthographe de l'adjectif healthy.
Bonne continuation.
Réponse: La voix active et la voix passive de TravisKidd, postée le 04-04-2009 à 19:34:04 (S | E)
Je n'en suis pas sûr, mais je doute que le verbe "be" ait une voix. Certainement ce verbe ne peut jamais être mis à la voix passive ("to be been" ne fait aucun sens).
