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Economic Crisis/correction
Message de mariinee posté le 19-03-2009 à 15:18:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
Je dois faire un paragraphe, m'aidant d'un article de journal anglais.
Pouvez m'indiquez mes eventuelles fautes . Merci beaucoup !

This article came out on Thursday, 5 February 2009 in “The international independent”. This paper is a daily bristish paper. The title of the article on which I have to decide to present is “Vote on deal to end British strike for British workers". This article deals with the British workers and foreign jobs. We are on the World economic crisis, and it’s very difficult for the workers because cause of this crisis, several big compagny cut down jobs. It is difficult for the unemployed because they can’t find a job again. The purchasing power decreases and the Stock exchange goes down.



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Réponse: Economic Crisis/correction de laure95, postée le 19-03-2009 à 18:48:14 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
This article came out (was published) on Thursday, 5 February 2009 in “The international independent”. This newspaper is a daily bristish (majuscule aux nationnalités) newspaper. The title of the article on which (that) I have to decide (participe passé) to present is “Vote on deal to end British strike for British workers". This article deals with the British workers and foreign jobs. We are on the World economic crisis, and it’s very difficult for the workers because cause of this crisis, several big compagny cut down jobs. It is difficult (tu viens de l'utiliser) for the unemployed because they can’t find a job again. The purchasing power decreases (présent be+-ing) and the Stock exchange goes (même remarque) down.

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