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Message de madinina93 posté le 01-03-2009 à 15:11:19 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, voila j'ai écrit un texte et je voulais savoir s'il y avait des fautes grammaticales ou autres.C'est pour les cours.
Texas Hold'em is the most popupular poker game in casinos across Europe and North America,
It is played in casinos, online poker sites, with family or friends , in cash game or in tournament. Except in casinos , the poker can be played with play money and not with real money.
Texas Hold'em's rules are really easy to learn. Two privates cards are dealt to each players then there is a betting round. Afterwards there are three community cards that are dealt face up to form the flop and the players do a second betting round. A fourth community card is dealt , it's the turn followed by a third betting round. Then a fifth community card is dealt , the river, and there is the fourth and last betting round. At the showdown, the player who make the best five-card hand win the pot.
But you must know the poker hands ranking too.
The ranking of the individual cards, from high to low, is ace, king, queen, jack, 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2.
Then there is the ranking of poker hand. A poker hand consist of five cards. This are the categories of hand , from highest to lowest :
Je montrerai une image
When you know all of this , you can play poker.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-03-2009 16:25
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Message de madinina93 posté le 01-03-2009 à 15:11:19 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, voila j'ai écrit un texte et je voulais savoir s'il y avait des fautes grammaticales ou autres.C'est pour les cours.
Texas Hold'em is the most popupular poker game in casinos across Europe and North America,
It is played in casinos, online poker sites, with family or friends , in cash game or in tournament. Except in casinos , the poker can be played with play money and not with real money.
Texas Hold'em's rules are really easy to learn. Two privates cards are dealt to each players then there is a betting round. Afterwards there are three community cards that are dealt face up to form the flop and the players do a second betting round. A fourth community card is dealt , it's the turn followed by a third betting round. Then a fifth community card is dealt , the river, and there is the fourth and last betting round. At the showdown, the player who make the best five-card hand win the pot.
But you must know the poker hands ranking too.
The ranking of the individual cards, from high to low, is ace, king, queen, jack, 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2.
Then there is the ranking of poker hand. A poker hand consist of five cards. This are the categories of hand , from highest to lowest :
Je montrerai une image
When you know all of this , you can play poker.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-03-2009 16:25
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Réponse: poker game/correction de TravisKidd, postée le 01-03-2009 à 16:16:45 (S | E)
Not bad.
A few suggestions and corrections however:
- Don't put a space between a comma and the word preceding it.
- "on" online poker sites
- "The rules of Texas Hold'em" (since Texas Hold'em isn't a person; also it avoids two apostrophes in the same word)
- private(no s) cards, each player(no s)
- a fourth community card -- called the "turn" -- is dealt
- the player who makes (or "has") ... wins
- the ranking of poker hands
- A poker hand consists
- These are the categories of hands....
Réponse: poker game/correction de linsey34, postée le 01-03-2009 à 16:17:09 (S | E)
Dear madinina,
Two privates cards
to each players
it's the turn followed by a third betting round.
le tour suivant?
si oui: the following turn
the player who make the best five-card hand win the pot.
3ème personne du singulier !A poker hand consist of five cards.
idem
This are the categories of hand , from the highest to the lowest :
pluriel de "this"?
Réponse: poker game/correction de azer3, postée le 01-03-2009 à 16:30:19 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Voilà quelques éléments de corrections.
Texas Hold'em is the most popupular poker game in casinos across Europe and North America,
It is played in casinos, online poker sites, with family or with friends , in cash game or in tournament. Except in casinos , the poker can be played with play money and not with real money.
Texas Hold'em's rules are really easy to learn. Two privates cards are dealt to each players then there is a betting round. Afterwards, there are three community cards that are dealt face up to form the flop and the players do a second betting round. A fourth community card is dealt , it's the turn followed by a third betting round. Then, a fifth community card is dealt , the river, and there is the fourth and last betting round. At the showdown, the player who make the best five-card hand wins the pot.
But you must know the poker hands ranking too.
The ranking of the individual cards, from high to low, is ace, king, queen, jack, 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, and 2.
Then, there is the ranking of poker hand. A poker hand consists of five cards. This are the categories of hand , from highest to lowest :
When you know all
Réponse: poker game/correction de madinina93, postée le 01-03-2009 à 18:10:00 (S | E)
Merci de vos réponses, en effet il y a des erreus stupides , mais mon écrit ne sera pas rendu , ca ne se passe qu'à l'oral.
En tout cas merci beaucoup
