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Temps et phrases/formulaire
Message de alphoto posté le 21-01-2009 à 10:43:47 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis en train de remplir un formulaire pour postuler pour un travail. Je dois écrire un texte pour présenter mes activités et donner des informations complémentaires.
Voici mon texte:
Since leaving France, I have been looking after a way to improve my english language and use my free days to volunteer for local charity and association.
I have work in a charity shop: Extra Care, where I have gained varied skills, such as preparing and pricing items for sale, arranging shop and windows displays, cutomer service and till operations.
I have also been helper in a Preschool, where I assisted in the daily activities and supervised children during lunchtimes.
I still help disabled children with horse riding sessions and I do babysitting for one year and a half.
I now wish to use this skills to start a new job.
J'aimerai avoir votre aide pour corriger les tournures de phrases si besoin et je ne suis vraiment pas sure des temps de verbe à mettre.
Merci d'avance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-01-2009 10:52
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Message de alphoto posté le 21-01-2009 à 10:43:47 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis en train de remplir un formulaire pour postuler pour un travail. Je dois écrire un texte pour présenter mes activités et donner des informations complémentaires.
Voici mon texte:
Since leaving France, I have been looking after a way to improve my english language and use my free days to volunteer for local charity and association.
I have work in a charity shop: Extra Care, where I have gained varied skills, such as preparing and pricing items for sale, arranging shop and windows displays, cutomer service and till operations.
I have also been helper in a Preschool, where I assisted in the daily activities and supervised children during lunchtimes.
I still help disabled children with horse riding sessions and I do babysitting for one year and a half.
I now wish to use this skills to start a new job.
J'aimerai avoir votre aide pour corriger les tournures de phrases si besoin et je ne suis vraiment pas sure des temps de verbe à mettre.
Merci d'avance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-01-2009 10:52
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Réponse: Temps et phrases/formulaire de laure95, postée le 21-01-2009 à 10:55:08 (S | E)
Bonjour, voici ce que tu dois corriger:
Since leaving (France, I have been looking after a way to improve my englishlanguage and use my free days to volunteer>(as a volunteer) for local charity and association.
I have work in a charity shop: Extra Care, where I have gained varied skills, such as preparing and pricing items for sale, arranging shop and windows displays, cutomer service and till operations.
I have also been helper 
in a Preschool, where I assisted in the daily activities and supervised children during lunchtimes.
I still help disabled children with horse riding sessions and I do (présent perfect si tu en fais toujours sinon prétérit) babysitting for one year and a half.
I now wish to use this skills to start a new job.
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Modifié par bridg le 21-01-2009 12:02Retrait des réponses / erreurs signalées, oui, mais laissez le membre proposer sa propre correction.
