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Temptation
Message de nuyoricaine posté le 30-11-2008 à 13:53:32 (S | E | F)
bonjour,est-ce que quelqu'un peut me dire si j'ai des fautes pls.
"I can resit everything except temptation" means when he wants to do something and he knows it's not good he can control him but when the emotions become too strong he doesn't manage it anymore because temptation is a deep desire that we repress, we don't want to give it up nor think of it but we don't manage, we are amok and the only way to relieve of temptation is to give it up. That's why nobody can resit to temptation, we can't control it, temptation controls you because it exceeds reason.Temptation is an uncontrollable thing
Message de nuyoricaine posté le 30-11-2008 à 13:53:32 (S | E | F)
bonjour,est-ce que quelqu'un peut me dire si j'ai des fautes pls.
"I can resit everything except temptation" means when he wants to do something and he knows it's not good he can control him but when the emotions become too strong he doesn't manage it anymore because temptation is a deep desire that we repress, we don't want to give it up nor think of it but we don't manage, we are amok and the only way to relieve of temptation is to give it up. That's why nobody can resit to temptation, we can't control it, temptation controls you because it exceeds reason.Temptation is an uncontrollable thing
Réponse: Temptation de robertbrou, postée le 01-12-2008 à 16:40:43 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Dans l'ensemble, c'est bon. Voici quelques conseils:
resit -> resist.
control him -> control it
Attention à la ponctuation. Il doit y avoir au moins 5 phrases différentes mais seulement un point.
J'espère que cela vous aide.
