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Message de jolienadou74 posté le 30-10-2008 à 21:29:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Je souhaiterais que l'on me corrige ma présentation en anglais.
et si possible que l'on m'explique les fautes.
Merci
My name is HAYETINE Célia. I am twenty years old.At present, I’m in first year of BTS sandwich course at the secondary school St Joseph to Sallanches.
I am holder of the BEP secretariat obtained in 2004 at the secondary school of the Cordeliers to Cluses as well as the baccalaureat STG option marketing made at the secondary of Mt Blanc in Fayet obtained in 2006.
In the report, you will discover the company in wich I make big one part of my time in the realisation of various spots which are important for me in the realisation of my project.
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Modifié par bridg le 31-10-2008 00:14
Message de jolienadou74 posté le 30-10-2008 à 21:29:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Je souhaiterais que l'on me corrige ma présentation en anglais.
et si possible que l'on m'explique les fautes.
Merci
My name is HAYETINE Célia. I am twenty years old.At present, I’m in first year of BTS sandwich course at the secondary school St Joseph to Sallanches.
I am holder of the BEP secretariat obtained in 2004 at the secondary school of the Cordeliers to Cluses as well as the baccalaureat STG option marketing made at the secondary of Mt Blanc in Fayet obtained in 2006.
In the report, you will discover the company in wich I make big one part of my time in the realisation of various spots which are important for me in the realisation of my project.
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Modifié par bridg le 31-10-2008 00:14
Réponse: Présentation en anglais de wysiwyg, postée le 31-10-2008 à 07:58:52 (S | E)
I am a fully-qualified secretary.I passed the exam in 2006 at Lycée des cordeliers in Cluses.
