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Message de chaachaa posté le 20-09-2008 à 10:55:19 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous. Je passe en PPC ( prise de parole continue) lundi en parlant d'un athlete qui a participé au jeux olympique. Pouvez vous me corriger SVP.
Merci d'avance
For this subject I chose an athlete, it is a French kayaker. His name is Fabien Lefevre, he is 26 years old and he was born in Orléan.
He won 7 medals in the World championships. He participated in the olympic games on 2004 and 2008 on kayak slalom. In 2004 The Olympic took place in athene and Fabien Lefevre won bronze medal nevertheless in the last olympiad He won a medal (d'argent) indeed He was beaten by Alexander grimm, a german competitor.
The event it is unwound in an artificial ponde.
Réponse: Correction d'un sujet de laure95, postée le 20-09-2008 à 19:22:59 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- I chose an athlete: utilise le present perfect.
- He won 7 medals: present perfect si tu veux mettre en valeur le nombre de médailles sinon laisse le prétérit.
- on 2004 and 2008: pas la bonne préposition.
- on kayak slalom: même remarque.
- The Olympic: il manque "games".
- bronze medal: mettre l'article "the" devant.
- médaille d'argent: silver medal.
-The event it is unwound in an artificial ponde: ?
Réponse: Correction d'un sujet de chaachaa, postée le 21-09-2008 à 14:11:20 (S | E)
For this subject I chosen an athlete, it is a French kayaker. His name is Fabien Lefevre, he is 26 years old and he was born in Orléan.
He has won 7 medals in the World championships. He participated in the olympic games in 2004 and 2008 at kayak slalom. In 2004 The Olympic games took place in athene and Fabien Lefevre won the bronze medal nevertheless in the last olympiad He won the silver medals indeed He was beaten by Alexander grimm, a german competitor.
The event took place in an artificial ponde. ( l'evenement s'est déroulé dans un bassin artificiel)
Réponse: Correction d'un sujet de chaachaa, postée le 21-09-2008 à 14:35:42 (S | E)
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