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Message de bart39 posté le 03-01-2008 à 00:08:19 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour, pouvez-vous me dire si cette interview est juste au niveau du sens et grammaticalement. Merci beaucoup
Pressman: Good morning, Ms. Murray and welcome.
Ms. Liz Murray: Good morning. Thanks for having me.
Pressman: Let’s talk about your life and your story. Where did you live? What was your marital status?
Ms.Liz Murray: I lived in New York in the Bronx and my family was destitute, my father was unemployed.
Pressman: Your parents were drug-addicted?
Ms. Liz Murray: Yes my parents were drug-addicted. They used all money for drugs. They sold my sister’s winter coat and they sold television set to get money for the drugs. When my mother didn’t have drugs she went completely crazy.
Pressman: What you got back money?
Ms. Liz Murray: My parents received welfare money every month and me I hide money before whom my mother find money.
Pressman: You had every job for get money?
Ms.liz Murray: Yes, I helped people to put their articles in bags in supermarkets and I pumped gas in gas-stations to earn a little money, as consequence I didn’t went to school.
Pressman: Your parents were separated that right?
Ms. Liz Murray: Yes my parents were separated in 1994, when I was thirteen.
Pressman: Then your mother is dead?
Ms. Liz Murray: Yes my mother suffered from tuberculosis and AIDS, she died in1996.
Pressman: You had fifteen when you was alone and homeless?
Ms. Liz Murray: Yes my father lived in a Shelter and my mother is dead, I was moneyless.
Pressman: Then you had decided to change her life and you went back to school?
Ms. Liz Murray: Yes, I went back to school, I managed to pass her exam in 2 years and I was entering Harvard.
Pressman: Thank you Liz Murray
Ms. Liz Murray: Thank you for having me.
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Modifié par bridg le 03-01-2008 06:33
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre de signaler les fautes, d'aider le demandeur à se corriger mais de ne jamais faire le travail à sa place. Cette règle est incontournable sur ce site d'apprentissage. Merci de votre participation.
Message de bart39 posté le 03-01-2008 à 00:08:19 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour, pouvez-vous me dire si cette interview est juste au niveau du sens et grammaticalement. Merci beaucoup
Pressman: Good morning, Ms. Murray and welcome.
Ms. Liz Murray: Good morning. Thanks for having me.
Pressman: Let’s talk about your life and your story. Where did you live? What was your marital status?
Ms.Liz Murray: I lived in New York in the Bronx and my family was destitute, my father was unemployed.
Pressman: Your parents were drug-addicted?
Ms. Liz Murray: Yes my parents were drug-addicted. They used all money for drugs. They sold my sister’s winter coat and they sold television set to get money for the drugs. When my mother didn’t have drugs she went completely crazy.
Pressman: What you got back money?
Ms. Liz Murray: My parents received welfare money every month and me I hide money before whom my mother find money.
Pressman: You had every job for get money?
Ms.liz Murray: Yes, I helped people to put their articles in bags in supermarkets and I pumped gas in gas-stations to earn a little money, as consequence I didn’t went to school.
Pressman: Your parents were separated that right?
Ms. Liz Murray: Yes my parents were separated in 1994, when I was thirteen.
Pressman: Then your mother is dead?
Ms. Liz Murray: Yes my mother suffered from tuberculosis and AIDS, she died in1996.
Pressman: You had fifteen when you was alone and homeless?
Ms. Liz Murray: Yes my father lived in a Shelter and my mother is dead, I was moneyless.
Pressman: Then you had decided to change her life and you went back to school?
Ms. Liz Murray: Yes, I went back to school, I managed to pass her exam in 2 years and I was entering Harvard.
Pressman: Thank you Liz Murray
Ms. Liz Murray: Thank you for having me.
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Modifié par bridg le 03-01-2008 06:33
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre de signaler les fautes, d'aider le demandeur à se corriger mais de ne jamais faire le travail à sa place. Cette règle est incontournable sur ce site d'apprentissage. Merci de votre participation.
