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Message de pechcore posté le 03-12-2007 à 15:46:48 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Je viens de finir mon exposé ; j'aimerais savoir si vous dénichez encore quelques fautes d'orthographe et de syntaxe !
Merci beaucoup.
I’m going to introduce you Poker, one of my favorite hobbies.
Poker is a popular type of card game in which players gamble on the superior value of the card combination in their possession, by placing a bet into a central pot. The winner is the one who holds the hand with the highest value according to an established hand rankings hierarchy or otherwise the player who remains in the hand after all others have folded.
Poker has many variations, all following a similar pattern of play. Depending on the variant, hands may be formed using cards which are concealed from others, or from a combination of concealed cards and community cards.
Texas hold 'em is the most popular poker variant. Hold'em is a community card game where each player may use any combination of the five community cards and their own two hole cards to make a poker hand, in contrast to poker games like stud or draw where each player holds a separate individual hand.
I play Texas hold’em since the beginning of the year. I discovered this game thanks to a friend who invited me to play a game of poker with him. Then I began to play on Internet, to read books about rules of poker, the history of the poker …
One of my objectives was to win enough money at online poker to buy poker chips and be able to play with my friends. Finally I bought one for me and I offer one for my friend for his birthday.
Now we are trying with my friend to play one or two times a month. Each puts two to five euro so that it is a minimum of stake there but we play essentially for fun.
One of my dreams would be to go to Las Vegas to play in a biggest casino with professional poker players like Gus Hansen or Daniel Negreanu.
To conclude I would like to say there are too many ideas received on poker. It is not gangster’s game or a game of chance. I challenge you to come to play with me.
Message de pechcore posté le 03-12-2007 à 15:46:48 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Je viens de finir mon exposé ; j'aimerais savoir si vous dénichez encore quelques fautes d'orthographe et de syntaxe !
Merci beaucoup.
I’m going to introduce you Poker, one of my favorite hobbies.
Poker is a popular type of card game in which players gamble on the superior value of the card combination in their possession, by placing a bet into a central pot. The winner is the one who holds the hand with the highest value according to an established hand rankings hierarchy or otherwise the player who remains in the hand after all others have folded.
Poker has many variations, all following a similar pattern of play. Depending on the variant, hands may be formed using cards which are concealed from others, or from a combination of concealed cards and community cards.
Texas hold 'em is the most popular poker variant. Hold'em is a community card game where each player may use any combination of the five community cards and their own two hole cards to make a poker hand, in contrast to poker games like stud or draw where each player holds a separate individual hand.
I play Texas hold’em since the beginning of the year. I discovered this game thanks to a friend who invited me to play a game of poker with him. Then I began to play on Internet, to read books about rules of poker, the history of the poker …
One of my objectives was to win enough money at online poker to buy poker chips and be able to play with my friends. Finally I bought one for me and I offer one for my friend for his birthday.
Now we are trying with my friend to play one or two times a month. Each puts two to five euro so that it is a minimum of stake there but we play essentially for fun.
One of my dreams would be to go to Las Vegas to play in a biggest casino with professional poker players like Gus Hansen or Daniel Negreanu.
To conclude I would like to say there are too many ideas received on poker. It is not gangster’s game or a game of chance. I challenge you to come to play with me.
Réponse: Correction de mon exposé de babyscot59, postée le 03-12-2007 à 15:57:14 (S | E)
voilà le corrigé de la grammaire, sous réserve des termes techniques du poker:
I’m going to introduce you Poker, one of my favorite hobbies.
Poker is a popular type of card game in which players gamble on the superior value of the card combination in their possession, by placing a bet into a central pot. The winner is the one who holds the hand with the highest value according to an established hand rankings hierarchy or otherwise the player who remains in the hand after all others have folded.
Poker has many variations, all following a similar pattern of play. Depending on the variant, hands may be formed using cards which are concealed from others, or from a combination of concealed cards and community cards.
Texas hold 'em is the most popular poker variant. Hold'em is a community card game where each player may use any combination of the five community cards and their own two hole cards to make a poker hand, in contrast to poker games like stud or draw where each player holds a separate individual hand.
I've been playing Texas hold’em since the beginning of the year. I discovered this game thanks to a friend who invited me to play a game of poker with him. Then I began to play on Internet, to read books about rules of poker, the history of the poker …
One of my objectives was to win enough money at online poker to buy poker chips and be able to play with my friends. Finally I bought one for me and I offer one for my friend for his birthday.
Now we are trying with my friend to play once or twice a month. Each puts two to five euros so it is little risky there but we play essentially for fun.
One of my dreams would be to go to Las Vegas to play in a bigger casino with professional poker players like Gus Hansen or Daniel Negreanu.
To conclude I would like to say there are too many prejudice on poker. It is not gangster’s game or a game of chance. I challenge you to come to play with me.
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Modifié par bridg le 03-12-2007 16:13
Merci d'avoir la gentillesse de ne pas faire le travail à la place des membres mais de les aider à se corriger
.Réponse: Correction de mon exposé de pechcore, postée le 03-12-2007 à 16:08:41 (S | E)
Merci pour cette réponse si rapide
Réponse: Correction de mon exposé de x-eki-univ3r-x, postée le 06-12-2007 à 18:13:57 (S | E)
hello!
je viens de faire un exposé sur les chevaux!
pourriez vous me dire ou son les fautes et me les corriger merci d'avance!
The horse is the cousin of the donkey and the zebra. The horse must be ride two or six old time by week.
A mare can have one or two babies in two year.
Is three years the babies become adult.
The horse have six-hundred or eight-hundred kilogram. They are very intelligent.
There's more than 250 spicies in the world.
He principles equestrian disciplines are:
Amazon, dressage, CSO, obstacle course, flat race, trot race, endurense, hunter, polo, volitige.
They are practiced in every club in France.
My favourite horse name is Lucky, he is five years old, I love it very much!
Look at the photography
