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Halloween correction !!!
Message de priscou555 posté le 29-10-2007 à 10:52:04 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour je voulais faire un texte sur les sorcières pour Halloween en anglais et je voudrais avoir une correction de ce texte.merci beaucoup
Since the most ancient time, the sorceresses have reputation poor: they suspected them of having concluded an alliance with the demon! In fact, it fact acted of women who knew virtues of plants, studied their books of magic during of years and how to recover from numerous wrong.The fright which they inspired in the men made baleful beings of them. That's why our intricate is souvent with his crochu, with clawed hands and the head full of poor fates.
Powers?
The sorceresses of fairy tales transform the delightful princes into frogs, the children in statue and throw sorts. They also cook up potions of love or violent poisons in their caldron. Finally, they read future in the guts of chicken and even know how to fly with their broom.
how to protect itself against it?
A brance of rowan hung on the door turns out to be trés efficient to move away the mediocre sorceresses. Opposite in face, to throw out the index and the little finger can outmaneuver their poor fates.
Voila en espérant que vous avez tout compris!!
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Modifié par bridg le 29-10-2007 12:18
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Message de priscou555 posté le 29-10-2007 à 10:52:04 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour je voulais faire un texte sur les sorcières pour Halloween en anglais et je voudrais avoir une correction de ce texte.merci beaucoup
Since the most ancient time, the sorceresses have reputation poor: they suspected them of having concluded an alliance with the demon! In fact, it fact acted of women who knew virtues of plants, studied their books of magic during of years and how to recover from numerous wrong.The fright which they inspired in the men made baleful beings of them. That's why our intricate is souvent with his crochu, with clawed hands and the head full of poor fates.
Powers?
The sorceresses of fairy tales transform the delightful princes into frogs, the children in statue and throw sorts. They also cook up potions of love or violent poisons in their caldron. Finally, they read future in the guts of chicken and even know how to fly with their broom.
how to protect itself against it?
A brance of rowan hung on the door turns out to be trés efficient to move away the mediocre sorceresses. Opposite in face, to throw out the index and the little finger can outmaneuver their poor fates.
Voila en espérant que vous avez tout compris!!
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Modifié par bridg le 29-10-2007 12:18
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Réponse: Halloween correction !!! de ninathecat, postée le 30-10-2007 à 08:57:25 (S | E)
Je pense que le dictionnaire du site te permettra de corriger les mots français que tu as laissé dans ton texte (souvent, pour n'en citer qu'un. Je te laisse chercher les autres).
Et je vois une faute dès la première phrase, avant les deux points. Là encore je te laisse chercher: c'est facile.
Je n'en ai pas vu d'autres, mais je ne suis pas très douée à ce petit jeu.
