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Rack your Brains and Help/ 50

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Rack your Brains and Help/ 50
Message de here4u posté le 12-07-2019 à 22:18:12 (S | E | F)
Hello, dear Friends!

Voici notre première édition de RYB de vacances ! Il est allégé, dans la mesure où, je pense, il vous demandera moins de temps à réaliser (à écrire et rédiger ... ) mais pas vraiment moins si, en travailleurs extrêmement sérieux, vous cherchez la plupart des éléments inconnus ou étonnants ...
Vous pouvez aussi décider de faire ces exercices "à l'économie" (en cherchant un minimum et en n'utilisant que vos connaissances déjà acquises ... ( l'objectif est différent, mais il n'est pas moins louable ...) Et puis, les vacances sont précieuses et le temps avec parents et/ ou amis l'est aussi ... Il faut aussi profiter des possibilités ... Ainsi, ceux qui veulent continuer le travail approfondi peuvent le faire, ceux qui ont moins de temps, n'ont cependant pas à renoncer (précisez-le moi cependant ...)
Cet exercice est un et sera corrigé le vendredi 26 juillet, tard.

I) Please, help my student! Ce texte contient 20 fautes à corriger ! (en majuscules !) (les fautes répétées ne comptent, bien sûr, qu’une fois … )
Why blue jeans are going green…
As consumers become ever more concerned for environmental and ethical issues, pioneers in the global denim industry are cleaning up its act. Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, which describes itself as a "craft jeans maker", has an open-door politics. Anybody can walk in, even without appointment ; through that they create « transparency ». (= a buzzword in fashion at late, with labels keen to show their best practice, both in terms of how well they treat staff and how environmentally friendly are they.)
By opening up its doors, this company is able to show potential customers that its factory is clean, the 20 employers are happy, and that the jeans are worth to keep - rather than to throw away at the end of each season.
Visitors to the workshop can even get a bite to eat, as it is home to a pop-up restaurant on weekends. More importantly, the company sources all its rolls of denim from mills in Japan, Italy and Turkey that have personally been visited to ensure their commitment to environmental and social responsibility. This is vital for any jeans company that wishes to be ethic, because the manufacture of denim can be heavily polluted.
Saitex International is one such business. Its factory now recycles 98% of water it uses. For the remaining 2% it has an evaporation system, making it a zero discharge facility.
Before setting up the factory in 2010 the Company started looking at sanitation, or inadequate sanitation, globally, and the lack of clean drink water. Morally it pushed them to start looking at water as a very valuable resource. It took the company just six years to earn the money it invested in the water recycling technology.
Some of the big name jeans firms are also working hard to reduce their environmental impact by using a foam instead of water ; the process also reduces energy use by 60.
Yet, what percentage shoppers are currently happy to pay the highest price tag that more ethically sourced jeans often carry? At Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, for example, their most expensive jeans cost £260.
When you ask consumers about what are their primary motivations for purchasing in apparel, then it's about price, about convenience, about range, and quality of product. Actually, sustainability - and ethical sourcing - doesn't necessarily sit within the three tops of what's important for consumers when thinking about purchasing for apparel good.
But the situation is changing, with rising demand for more ethical clothing being led by young people.
They've become a lot more concerned for the societal impact that they're having, weather that's on the environment, the economy, and other area as well.

II. In this text, a few words (10) have been deleted… … Can you fill in the blanks and try to guess the missing words… (Of course, there are several «right possibilities»… Yet, you’re required to choose the most satisfactory ones, fitting the situation.)

Making jeans can … (1) a steep environmental toll, because the dye used to give them their usual … (2) shade - indigo - does not easily stick to the raw cotton. "To get the dye on, we have to dye the … (3) multiple times," he says. "And by dying it multiple times, obviously we need to use more water and more …."(4)
Then a jeans-maker may wash and … (5) the jeans many times to lighten the colour, creating even more waste water. By some estimates it can take … (6) of … (7) of water to make one pair of jeans. Such industries use a huge amount of water, and a huge amount of energy.
In many denim … (8) and jeans factories the … (9) water - which contains the dye, plus bleach and other chemicals - is simply released as waste water. …, (10) a growing number of producers are now eliminating waste water altogether.

Please, give me your best, as always... and I give you THE FORCE...




Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de taiji43, postée le 14-07-2019 à 18:50:40 (S | E)
Hello Here4U
here is my correction , 4 mistakes are still in this try;I don't want to add oher mistakes

READY TO BE CORRECTED
As consumers become ever more concerned ABOUT environmental and ethical issues, pioneers in the global denim industry are cleaning up its act.

Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, which describes itself as a "craft jeans maker", has an open-door POLICY (politique)

Anybody can walk in, even without appointment ; through that they create « transparency ». (= a buzzword in fashion OF late (recemment), with labels keen to show their best practice, both in terms of how well they treat staff and how environmentally friendly THEY ARE.)

By opening up its doors, this company is able to show potential customers that its factory is clean, the 20 EMPLYEES (employer signifie patron) are happy, and that the jeans are worth KEEPING (ing après worth) - rather than to throw away at the end of each season.

Visitors to the workshop can even get a bite to eat, as it is home to a pop-up restaurant on weekends. More importantly, the company sources all its rolls of denim from mills in Japan, Italy and Turkey that have personally been visited to ensure their commitment to environmental and social responsibility.

This is vital for any jeans company that wishes to be ETHICAL, because the manufacture of denim can be heavily POLLUTING (polluante)(pas polluée)

Saitex International is one such business. Its factory now recycles 98% of water it uses. For the remaining 2% it has an evaporation system, making it a zero discharge facility.

Before setting up the factory in 2010 the Company started looking at sanitation, or inadequate sanitation, globally, and the lack of clean DRINKING water (eau potable). Morally it pushed them to start looking at water as a very valuable resource.

It took the company just six years to earn the money it invested in the water recycling technology.
Some of the big name jeans firms are also working hard to reduce their environmental impact by using a foam instead of water ; the process also reduces energy use ( use =consommation???) by 60.

Yet, what percentage shoppers are currently happy to pay the highest price tag that more ethically sourced jeans often carry?

At Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, for example, ITS (son) most expensive jeans cost £260.
When you ask consumers about what their primary motivations ARE for purchasing in apparel, then it's about price, about convenience, about range, and quality of product.

Actually, sustainability - and ethical sourcing - doesn't necessarily sit within the three tops of what's important for consumers when thinking about purchasing for apparel GOODS (articles)

But the situation is changing, with rising demand for more ethical clothing being led by young people.

They've become a lot more concerned ABOUT the societal impact that they're having, WHETHER (si) that's on the environment, the economy, and other AREAS ( plusieurs domaines???) as well.

Je n'ai pas trouvé les 20 fautes mais 16

II) READY TO BE CORRECTED (16/07,21h)
Making jeans can … (1) a steep environmental toll, because the dye used to give them their usual BLUE… (2) shade - indigo - does not easily stick to the raw cotton. "To get the dye on, we have to dye the MATERIAL… (3) multiple times," he says. "And by dying it multiple times, obviously we need to use more water and more ENERGY…."(4)
Then a jeans-maker may wash and DECOLOR… (5) the jeans many times to lighten the colour, creating even more waste water. By some estimates it can take MANY… (6) of LITERS… (7) of water to make one pair of jeans. Such industries use a huge amount of water, and a huge amount of energy.
In many denim MILLS… (8) and jeans factories the EMPLOYED… (9) water - which contains the dye, plus bleach and other chemicals - is simply released as waste water. …, (10) a growing number of producers are now eliminating waste water altogether.




Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de maxwell, postée le 17-07-2019 à 10:48:16 (S | E)
Hello Here4U
READY TO BE CORRECTED
The link between the second exercise and the text made it much easier to understand the context. I couldn't have done it without finishing "help my student" first.

I. Help my student:
Why blue jeans are going green…
As consumers become ever more concerned ABOUT environmental and ethical issues, pioneers in the global denim industry are cleaning up its act.
Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, which describes itself as a "craft jeans maker", has an open-door POLICY.
Anybody can walk in, even without appointment ; through that they create « transparency ». (= a buzzword in fashion LATELY, with labels keen to show their best PRACTICES, both in terms of how well they treat staff and how environmentally friendly THEY are.)
By opening up its doors, this company CAN show potential customers that its factory is clean, the 20 EMPLOYEES are happy, and that the jeans are worth KEEPING - rather than THROWING away at the end of each season.
Visitors to the workshop can even get a bite to eat, as it is home to a pop-up restaurant on weekends.
MOST importantly, the company sources all its rolls of denim from mills in Japan, Italy and Turkey that have been PERSONALLY visited to ensure their commitment to environmental and social responsibility.
This is vital for any jeans company that wishes to be ETHICAL, because the manufacture of denim can be heavily POLLUTING.
Saitex International is one such business. Its factory IS now RECYCLING 98% of THE water it uses. For the remaining 2% it has an evaporation system, making it a zero discharge facility.
Before setting up the factory in 2010 the Company started looking at sanitation, or inadequate sanitation, globally, and the lack of clean DRINKING water.
Morally it pushed them to start looking at water as a very valuable resource.
It took the company just six years to RECOVER the money it HAD invested in the water recycling technology.
Some of the big NAMES OF jeans firms are also working hard to reduce their environmental impact by using [] foam instead of water ; the process also reduces energy use by 60 PERCENT.
Yet, what percentage OF shoppers are currently happy to pay the highest price tag that MOST ethically sourced jeans often carry?
At Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, for example, ITS most expensive jeans cost £260.
When you ask consumers about what their primary motivations for purchasing [] apparel PRODUCTS ARE, then it's about price, about convenience, about range, and quality of product.
Actually, sustainability - and ethical sourcing - doesn't necessarily PLACE within the TOP three of what's important for consumers when thinking about purchasing [] apparel GOODS.
But the situation is changing, with rising demand for more ethical clothing being led by young people.
They've become a lot more concerned ABOUT the societal impact that they're having, WHETHER that BE on the environment, the economy, and other AREAS as well.

II) Fill in the blanks:

Making jeans can HAVE (1) a steep environmental toll, because the dye used to give them their usual BLUE (2) shade - indigo - does not easily stick to the raw cotton. "To get the dye on, we have to dye the FABRIC (3) multiple times," he says. "And by dying it multiple times, obviously we need to use more water and more ENERGY."(4)
Then a jeans-maker may wash and DYE (5) the jeans many times to lighten the colour, creating even more waste water. By some estimates it can take THOUSANDS (6) of LITERS (7) of water to make one pair of jeans. Such industries use a huge amount of water, and a huge amount of energy.
In many denim MANUFACTURES (8) and jeans factories the USED (9) water - which contains the dye, plus bleach and other chemicals - is simply released as waste water. FORTUNATELY, (10) a growing number of producers are now eliminating waste water altogether.



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de magie8, postée le 17-07-2019 à 23:38:54 (S | E)
hello bonjour à tous
ready to correct
Why blue jeans are going green…
As consumers become ever more concerned ABOUT environmental and ethical issues, pioneers in the global denim industry are cleaning up its act. Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, which describes itself as a "craft jeans maker", has an open-door poliCY.Anybody can walk in, even without appointment ; through that they create « transparency ». (= a buzzword in fashion OF late, with labels keen to show their best practice, both in terms of how well they treat staff and how environmentally friendly THEY ARE.)
By opening up its doors, this company is able to show potential customers that its factory is clean, the 20 employers are happy, and that the jeans are worth KEEPING - rather than THROWING ' away at the end of each season.
Visitors to the workshop can even get a bite to eat, as it is home to a pop-up restaurant AT weekends. More importantly, the company sources all its rolls of denim from mills in Japan, Italy and Turkey that have BEEN PERSONALLY visited to ensure their commitment to environmental and social responsibility. This is vital for any jeans company that wishes to be ethicAL , because the manufacture of denim can be heavily pollutING.
Saitex International is one such business. THIS factory now recycles 98% of THE water it uses. For the remaining 2% it has an evaporation system, making it a zero discharge facility.
Before setting up the factory in 2010 the Company started looking at sanitation, or inadequate sanitation, globally, and the lack of clean drinkING water. Morally it pushed them to start looking at water as a very valuable resource. It took the company just six years to RECOUP the money it invested in the water recycling technology.
Some of the big name jeans firms are also working hard to reduce their environmental impact by using a foam instead of water ; the process also reduces energy use by 60 PERCENT.
Yet, what percentage shoppers are currently happy to pay the highest price tag that more ethically sourced jeans often DISPLAY? At Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, for example, THE most expensive jeans cost £260.
When you ask consumers about what are their primary motivations ARE for PURCHASING IN APPAREL 'p then it's about price, about convenience, about range, and quality of product. Actually, sustainability - and ethical sourcing - doesn't necessarily APPEAR within the three tops of what's important for consumers when thinking about purchasing for APPAREL GOODS .
But the situation is changing, with rising demand for more ethical clothing being led by young people.
They've become a lot more concerned for the societal impact that they're having, WHETHER that's on the environment, the economy, and other areaS as well.

II. In this text, a few words (10) have been deleted… … Can you fill in the blank

Making jeans can HAVE… (1) a steep environmental toll, because the dye used to give them their usual BLUE… (2) shade - indigo - does not easily stick to the raw cotton. "To get the dye on, we have to dye the FABRIC… (3) multiple times," he says. "And by dying it multiple times, obviously we need to use more water and more ENERGY…."(4)
Then a jeans-maker may wash and RINCE… (5) the jeans many times to lighten the colour, creating even more waste water. By some estimates it can take THOUSANDS… (6) of LITERS… (7) of water to make one pair of jeans. Such industries use a huge amount of water, and a huge amount of energy.
In many denim INDUSTRIES… (8) and jeans factories the POLLUTED … (9) water - which contains the dye, plus bleach and other chemicals - is simply released as waste water. THEREBY…, (10) a growing number of producers are now eliminating waste water altogether.

FINISHED, THANK YOU FOR CORRECTION




Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de alpiem, postée le 19-07-2019 à 21:02:08 (S | E)
hELLO, hERE 4U, HERE IS MY RACK 50 READY FOR CORRECTION

Why blue jeans are going green?

As consumers become ever more concerned ABOUT environmental and ethical issues, pionners in the global denim industry are cleaning up its act. Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, which describeS itself as a "craft jeans maker", has un open-door POLITIC.
Anybody can walk in , even without AN appointment; through that they create "tranparency". (= a buzzword in fashion OF LATE,with labels keen to show their best PRACTICES, both in terms of how well they treat staf and how ENVIRONMENTAL friendly THEY ARE.
By opening up its doors this company is able to show potential customers that its factory is clean, THAT the twenty employees are happy, and that the jeans are worth KEEPING rather than THROWING away at the end of the season.
THE visitors to the workshop can even get a bite to eat,as it is home to a pop-up restaurant on weekends.
More importantly the company sources all its rolls of denim from mills in Japan, Italy and Turkey that have personally been visited to ensure their commitment to environmental and social responsibility.
This is vital for any jeans company that wishes to be ethic, because the manufacture of denim can be heavily POLLUTING.
Saltex International is one such business.Its factory now recycles 98% of THE water it uses.For the remaining 2% it has an evaporation system, making it a zero discharge facility.
Before setting up the factory in 2010 the Company started looking at sanitation or inadequate sanitation, globally and the lack of clean DRINKING water.Morally it pushed them to start looking at water as a very valuable resource.
It took the company just six years to earn the money it invested in the water recycling technology.
A FEW of the big name jeans firms are also working hard to reduce their environmental impact by using foam instead of water;the process also reduces energy use by 60%.
Yet, what percentage shoppers are currently READY to pay the highest price tag that more ethically sourced jeans often carry?
At Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, for exemple,their most expensive jeans cost £260.
When you ask consumers about what are their primary motivations for purchasing AN apparel,then it's about price, about convenience, about range, and quality of product.Actually, sustainability-and ethical sourcing-DON'T necessarily sit within the TOP THREE of what's important for consumers when thinking about purchasing apparel goods.
But the situation is changing, with rising demand for more ethical clothing being led by young people.
They've become a lot more concerned for the societal impact that they're having, WHETHER that's on the environment, the economy, and other AREAS as well.




Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de here4u, postée le 21-07-2019 à 10:21:12 (S | E)
Hello dear Holiday-makers!

I hope you're enjoying Life...
Because of a slowish Internet connexion, I'll start sending the corrections of the different exercises today. Still a lot of time to give me your work, but please, help me keep the deadlines...
Still expecting suggestions of the new exercises you'd like to play with...
Have a wonderful Sunday and get ready for the heat...



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de joe39, postée le 21-07-2019 à 18:23:36 (S | E)
Bonsoir, chère here4u,
avant que mon élan ne soit submergé par la
bulle africaine de chaleur,
je vous envoie mon travaille sué,
prêt à être corrigé.

Please, help my student! Ce texte contient 20 fautes à corriger ! (en majuscules !) (les fautes répétées ne comptent, bien sûr, qu’une fois … )
Why blue jeans are going green…
As consumers become ever more concerned ABOUT-1 environmental and ethical issues, pioneers in the global denim industry are cleaning up its act. Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, which describes itself as a "craft jeans maker", has an open-door politics.
Anybody can walk in THERE-2, even without appointment ;” through that WE -3 create transparency ». (= a buzzword in fashion OF-4 late, with labels keen to show their best practice, both in terms of how well they treat staff and how environmentally friendly THEY ARE-5.)
By opening up its doors, this company is able to show potential customers that its factory is clean, THEIR -6, 20 employers are happy, and that the jeans are worth KEEPING-7 - rather than THROWING-8 away at the end of each season.

Visitors to the workshop can even get a bite to eat, as it is home to a pop-up restaurant AT -8 weekends.
More importantly, the company sources all its rolls of denim from mills in Japan, Italy and Turkey WHICH - 9 have personally been visited to ensure their commitment to environmental and social responsibility. This is vital for any jeans company that wishes to be ETHICAL- 10 , because the manufacture of denim can be heavily POLLUTING - 11
Saitex International is one OF -12 such business. Its factory now recycles 98% of water it uses. For the remaining 2% it has an evaporation system, making it a zero discharge facility.
Before setting up the factory in 2010 the Company started looking at sanitation, or inadequate sanitation, globally, and the lack of clean DRINKING-13 water. Morally it pushed them to start looking at water as a very valuable resource. It took the company just six years to RECOVER-14 the money it invested in the water recycling technology.
Some of the big name jeans firms are also working hard to reduce their environmental impact by using a foam instead of water ; the process also reduces energy use by 60PERCENT -15. Yet, what percentage OF -16 shoppers are currently happy to pay the highest price tag that more ethically sourced jeans often carry. Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, for example, WHOSE-17 most expensive jeans cost £260.

When you ask consumers about what THEIR PRIMARY MOTIVATIONS ARE - 18
for purchasing in apparel, then it's about price, about convenience, about range, and quality of product. Actually, sustainability - and ethical sourcing - doesn't necessarily sit within the TOP THREE -19 of what's important for consumers when thinking about purchasing for apparel good.
But the situation is changing, with rising demand for more ethical clothing being led by young people.
They've become a lot more concerned for the societal impact that they're having, WHETHER-20 that's on the environment, the economy, and other area as well.

II. In this text, a few words (10) have been deleted… … Can you fill in the blanks and try to guess the missing words… (Of course, there are several «right possibilities»… Yet, you’re required to choose the most satisfactory ones, fitting the situation.)

Making jeans can CARRY… (1) a steep environmental toll, because the dye used to give them their usual BLUE… (2) shade - indigo - does not easily stick to the raw cotton. "To get the dye on, we have to dye the THE FABRIC… (3) multiple times," he says. "And by dying it multiple times, obviously we need to use more water and more ENERGY…."(4)
Then a jeans-maker may wash and BLEACH… (5) the jeans many times to lighten the colour, creating even more waste water. By some estimates it can take THOUSANDS … (6) of LITERS… (7) of water to make one pair of jeans. Such industries use a huge amount of water, and a huge amount of energy.
In many denim MILLS… (8) and jeans factories the USED… (9) water - which contains the dye, plus bleach and other chemicals - is simply released as waste water. LUKILY…, (10) a growing number of producers are now eliminating waste water altogether.

Thanking very much for the nice exercise, I wish you a pleasant evening in spite of
the heat.

So long.
Joe39




Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de icare29, postée le 22-07-2019 à 23:52:04 (S | E)
Hello Here4u ,and all hard workers , here is my work ,OK FOR CORRECTION

¨Making jeans can HAVE (1) a steep environmental toll, because the dye used to give them their usual FASHIONABLE (2)- shade - indigo does not easily stick to the raw cotton. "To get the dye on, we have to dye the FABRIC (3) multiple times," he says. "And by dying it multiple times, obviously we need to use more water and more ENERGY"(4)
Then a jeans-maker may wash and BLEACH(5) the jeans many times to lighten the colour, creating even more waste water. By some estimates it can take TENS (6) of CUBIC-METER (7) of water to make one pair of jeans. Such industries use a huge amount of water, and a huge amount of energy.
In many denim MILLS (8) and jeans factories the USED (9) water ? which contains the dye, plus bleach and other chemicals ? is simply released as waste water. NOWADAYS , (10) a growing number of producers are now eliminating waste water altogether.


Why blue jeans are going green?
As consumers become ever more concerned ABOUT environmental and ethical issues, pioneers in the global denim industry are cleaning up its act. Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, which describes itself as a "craft jeans maker", has an open-door POLICY.
Anybody can walk in, even without appointment ; through that they create « transparency ». (= a buzzword in fashion AT LATE TIMES), with labels keen ON SHOWING their BETTER practice, both in terms of how well they treat staff and how environmentally friendly THEY ARE.)
By opening up its doors, this company is able to show potential customers that its factory is clean, the 20 EMPLOYEES are happy, and that the jeans are worth KEEPING - rather than THROWING away at the end of each season.
Visitors to the workshop can even get a bite to eat, as it is home to a pop-up restaurant AT weekends. More importantly, the company sources all its rolls of denim from mills in Japan, Italy and Turkey ,AND HAS personally BEEN VISITING to ensure ITS commitment to environmental and social responsibility.
This is vital for any jeans company that wishes to be ETHICAL, because the MANUFACTURING of denim can be heavily POLLUTING.
Saitex International is one OF such business. Its factory now recycles 98% of water it uses. For the remaining 2% it has an evaporation system, making it a zero discharge facility.
Before setting up the factory in 2010 the Company started looking at sanitation, or inadequate sanitation, globally, and the lack of clean drink water. Morally it pushed them to start looking at water as a very valuable resource. It took the company just six years to AMORTISE the money it invested in the water recycling technology.
Some of the big name jeans firms are also working hard to reduce their environmental impact by using ( ) foam instead of water ; the process also reduces energy USED UP TO 60%
Yet, what IS THE percentage OF shoppers currently happy to pay the highest price tag FOR THE MOST ethically sourced jeans often CARRIED ? At Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, for example, THE most expensive jeans cost £260 EACH.
When you ask consumers about what their primary motivations for purchasing in apparel ARE, then it's about price, about convenience, about range, and quality of product. Actually, sustainability - and ethical sourcing - doesn't necessarily sit within the TOP THREE of what's important for consumers when thinking about purchasing for apparel GOODS.
But the situation is changing, with rising demand for more ethical clothing being led by young people.
They've become a lot more concerned WITH the societal impact that they're having, WHETHER that's on the environment, the economy, and other AREAS as well..

Dear Here4u thanks a lot for your new good exercise I have done my best for it



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de chocolatcitron, postée le 24-07-2019 à 02:26:42 (S | E)
Rack your Brains and Help/ 50
Message de here4u posté le 12-07-2019 à 22:18:12 FINISHED.
Hello, my dear Here4u! Thanks !

Here is my work:
I) Please, help my student! Ce texte contient 20 fautes à corriger ! (en majuscules !) (les fautes répétées ne comptent, bien sûr, qu’une fois … )
Why blue jeans are going green…
As consumers become ever more concerned ABOUT environmental and ethical issues, pioneers in the global denim industry are cleaning up its act. Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, which describes itself as a "craft jeans maker", has an open-door POLICY. Anybody can walk in, even without appointment ; through that they create « transparency ». (= a buzzword in fashion LATELY, with labels keen ON SHOWING their best practice, both in terms of how well they treat staff and how environmentally friendly they ARE.)
By opening up its doors, this company is able to show potential customers that its factory is clean, the 20 EMPLOYEES are happy, and that the jeans are worth KEEPING - rather than THROWING away at the end of each season.
Visitors to the workshop can even get a bite to eat, as it is home to a pop-up restaurant AT weekends. More importantly, the company sources all its rolls of denim from mills in Japan, Italy and Turkey that have personally been visited to ensure their commitment to environmental and social responsibility. This is vital for any jeans company that wishes to be ETHICAL, because the manufacture of denim can be heavily POLLUTING.
Saitex International is one such business. Its factory now recycles 98% of THE water it uses. For the remaining 2% it has an evaporation system, making it a zero discharge facility.
Before setting up the factory in 2010 the Company started looking at sanitation, or inadequate sanitation, globally, and the lack of clean DRINKABLE water. Morally it pushed them to start looking at water as a very valuable resource. It took the company just six years to AMORTISE the money it HAD invested in the water recycling technology.
Some of the big NAMES OF jeans firms are also working hard to reduce their environmental impact by using a foam instead of water ; the process also reduces energy use by 60.
Yet, what percentage OF shoppers are currently happy to pay the highest price tag that more ethically sourced jeans often carry? At Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, for example, ITS most expensive jeans cost £260.
When you ask consumers about what are their primary motivations for purchasing in apparel, then it's about price, about convenience, about range, and quality of product. Actually, sustainability - and ethical sourcing - doesn't necessarily sit within the TOP three of what's important for consumers when thinking about purchasing for apparel GOODS.
But the situation is changing, with rising demand for more ethical clothing being led by young people.
They've become a lot more concerned ABOUT the societal impact that they're having, weather that's on the environment, the economy, and other AREAS as well.



II. In this text, a few words (10) have been deleted… … Can you fill in the blanks and try to guess the missing words… (Of course, there are several «right possibilities»… Yet, you’re required to choose the most satisfactory ones, fitting the situation.)

Making jeans can TAKE (1)(take a toll = laisser des traces) a steep environmental toll, because the dye used to give them their usual BLUE… (2) shade - indigo - does not easily stick to the raw cotton. "To get the dye on (= teindre), we have to dye the …TISSUE (3) multiple times," he says. "And by dying it multiple times, obviously we need to use more water and more ENERGY (4)
Then a jeans-maker may wash and BLEED (dégorger)(5) the jeans many times to lighten the colour, creating even more waste water. By some estimates it can take THOUSANDS (6) of LITERS… (7) of water to make one pair of jeans. Such industries use a huge amount of water, and a huge amount of energy.
In many denim WEARS (8) and jeans factories the COLOURED (9) water - which contains the dye, plus bleach and other chemicals - is simply released as waste water. NOWDAYS, (10) a growing number of producers are now eliminating waste water altogether.
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Please, give me your best, as always... and I give you THE FORCE...
Here is the FORCE to you !
See you soon.



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de alpiem, postée le 24-07-2019 à 12:55:39 (S | E)
hello, here I am with the first tranlation in french: for trusting me.

La plupart des habitants de ce dictrict d'Afrique commencent maintenant à prêter une certaine valeur aux bouteilles en plastique .Ils ne les considèrent plus comme des poubelles, et sont persuadés que ce système peut solutionner le problème. Les parents de cette école de Lagos payent les frais avec du plastique.
"Je me bats pour payer mes frais de scolarité ; quelques fois j'en paye la moitié et le restant plus tard .Depuis l'apparition de ce projet, le plastique m'a permis de payer les frais plus facilement, explique une maman; elle parle du Projet d'Education au Payment en Recyclant( PEPR) dont Lagos est le premier endroit où
ce modèle a été créé.Cela permettra aux parents de payer les charges de leurs écoles en utilisant du plastique soit des bouteilles, des poches d'eau minérale, des canettes et bientôt peut-être du carton.



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de here4u, postée le 24-07-2019 à 17:14:25 (S | E)
Hello!

Message à Alpiem ... qui s'est trompé de texte traduit !

Don't forget to have the CORRECTED text before starting volunteering for a translation!




Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de nate, postée le 26-07-2019 à 02:21:51 (S | E)
Hello !
It’s been quite some time since I’ve worked on this. Admittedly, it’s not my favorite one.

READY FOR CORRECTION

I) Please, help my student!

Why blue jeans are going green…
As consumers become ever more concerned ABOUT (1) environmental and ethical issues, pioneers in the global denim industry are cleaning up THEIR (2) act. Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, which describes itself as a "craft jeans maker", has an open-door POLICY (3). Anybody can walk in, even without AN (4) appointment ; through that they create « transparency ». (= a buzzword in fashion OF (5) late, with labels keen to show their best practice, both in terms of how well they treat staff and how environmentally friendly THEY ARE (6).)
By opening up its doors, this company is able to show potential customers that its factory is clean, the 20 EMPLOYEES (7) are happy, and that the jeans are worth KEEPING (8) - rather than THROWING (9) away at the end of each season.
Visitors to the workshop can even get a bite to eat, as it is home to a pop-up restaurant on weekends (on weekends is AmE which is weird because according to WR, using ‘jeans’ as an adjective in the plural is BrE...). More importantly, the company sources all its rolls of denim from mills in Japan, Italy and Turkey that have personally been visited to ensure their commitment to environmental and social responsibility. This is vital for any jeans company that wishes to be ETHICAL (10), because the manufacture of denim can be heavily polluted.
Saitex International is one such business. Its factory now recycles 98% of THE (11) water it uses. For the remaining 2% it has an evaporation system, making it a zero discharge facility.
Before setting up the factory in 2010 the Company started looking at sanitation, or inadequate sanitation, globally, and the lack of clean DRINKABLE (12) water. Morally it pushed them to start looking at water as a very valuable resource. It took the company just six years to earn the money it HAD (13) invested in (the) (14) water recycling technology.
Some of the big name jeans firms are also working hard to reduce their environmental impact by using (a) (15) foam instead of water ; the process also reduces energy use by 60 (% ?).
Yet (‘Still’ serait mieux car ‘yet’ dans le sens de ‘but’ doit être utilisé comme conjonction), what percentage OF (16) shoppers are currently happy to pay the highest price tag that more ethically sourced jeans often carry? At Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, for example, their most expensive jeans cost £260.
When you ask consumers about what their primary motivations for purchasing in apparel ARE (17), then it's about price, about convenience, about range, and THE (18) quality of product. Actually, sustainability - and ethical sourcing - doesn't necessarily sit within the three tops of what's important for consumers when thinking about purchasing for apparel good.
But the situation is changing, with rising demand for more ethical clothing being led by young people.
They've become a lot more concerned ABOUT the societal impact that they're having, WHETHER (19) that's on the environment, the economy, and other AREAS (20) as well.



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de here4u, postée le 26-07-2019 à 08:58:50 (S | E)
Hi nate !

Hello vaiana! Your try has disappeared... Have you deleted it? Pity, it looked good!



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de here4u, postée le 26-07-2019 à 23:38:27 (S | E)
Hello Dear Hardworkers!

Voici votre correction et les traditionnels appels aux volontaires (qui devront être nombreux, cette fois, car les textes sont longs et ne sont pas faciles du tout … )
J’indiquerai, dans les textes, les changements de parties pour chaque volontaire …
Ce devoir difficile a bien aiguisé votre curiosité. Vous avez bien cherché … et le plus souvent trouvé ! Bravo !
Nous avons besoin de 5 (CINQ !) volontaires nécessaires pour le texte corrigé + DEUX pour le texte à trous. MERCI de ce travail indispensable lorsque le texte est si difficile …

Why blue jeans are going green (**)
As consumers become ever more concerned about (1) environmental and ethical issues, pioneers in the global denim industry are cleaning up its * act. Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, which describes itself as a "craft jeans maker", has an open-door policy (2). Anybody can walk in, even without an (3) appointment ; through that they create « transparency ». (= a buzzword in fashion of (4) late, with labels keen to show ** their best practice, both in terms of how well they treat staff and how environmentally friendly they are (5).)/// END OF PART 1///
By opening up its doors, this company is able to show potential customers that its factory is clean, the 20 employees (6) are happy, and that the jeans are worth keeping - rather than throwing (7) away at the end of each season.
Visitors to the workshop can even get a bite to eat, as it is home to a pop-up restaurant at weekends.(8) More importantly, the company sources all its rolls of denim from mills in Japan, Italy and Turkey that have personally been visited to ensure their commitment to environmental and social responsibility. )./// END OF PART 2///
This is vital for any jeans company that wishes to be ethical (9), because the manufacture of denim can be heavily polluting (10).
Saitex International is one such business.**** Its factory now recycles 98% of the water (11) it uses. For the remaining 2% it has an evaporation system, making it a zero discharge facility.
Before setting up the factory in 2010 the Company started looking at sanitation, or inadequate sanitation, globally, and the lack of clean drinking water (12). Morally it pushed them to start looking at water as a very valuable resource. It took the company just six years to earn back (13) the money it invested in the water recycling technology. )./// END OF PART 3///
Some of the big name jeans firms are also working hard to reduce their environmental impact, using a foam instead of water ; the process also reduces energy use by 60.
Yet, what percentage of shoppers (14) are currently happy to pay the higher price tag (15) that more ethically sourced jeans often carry? At Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, for example, their most expensive jeans cost £260.
When you ask consumers about what their primary motivations are (16) for purchasing in apparel, )./// END OF PART 4///
then it's about price, about convenience, about range, and quality of product. Actually, sustainability - and ethical sourcing - doesn't necessarily sit within the top three (17) of what's important for consumers when thinking about purchasing for apparel goods (18).
But the situation is changing, with rising demand for more ethical clothing being led by young people.
They've become a lot more concerned about the societal impact that they're having, whether (19) that's on the environment, the economy, and other areas (20) as well. ).)/// END OF PART 5///


** Attention, cette première phrase « titre » est à la forme affirmative et ne doit donc pas être suivie d’un point d’interrogation ! Bien sûr, il y a un « jeu de mots » sur les couleurs « blue » and « green », qu’il conviendra de traduire au mieux …
* « its » refers to « the denim industry ».
** Lien internet

**** Attention ! one such business = a business such as this one ; si vous transformez en « one of such business » le singulier de « business » est alors impossible : one such man/ one of such men.
(1) To be concerned ABOUT/ WITH something.
(2) Difference between « policy » and « politics ». Lien internet

Lien internet

(3) Après « without », article indéfini obligatoire.
(4) of late= récemment
(5) Attention aux interrogatives indirectes. … how well they treat, and how environmentally friendly they are. (Questions directes = How well do they treat… ? / How environmentally friendly are they ?
(6) Différence entre « employers » et « employees ».
(7) To be worth + V en ing => worth keeping rather than throwing away… (les deux verbes sont sur le même plan)
(8) « at weekends »
(9) wishes to be ethical= adjectif attribut.
(10) « the manufacture of denim can be heavily polluting » : l’usine est l’agent polluant et fait l’action de polluer (participe présent) plus qu’elle ne la subit (participe passé)!
(11) of the water : pas n’importe quelle eau en général, mais cette eau particulière qui a été utilisée et polluée.
(12) drinking water= water reserved or suitable for drinking, ce n’est donc, évidemment pas l’eau qui fait l’action de boire.
(13) to earn back= regagner, récupérer le montant investi pour les travaux importants.
(14) a percentage of shoppers= a proportion of customers.
(15) the higher price tag= a tag= a label ; the price= the amount necessary to buy the jeans.
(16) When you ask consumers about what their primary motivations are… = interrogative indirecte introduite par « when you ask… » Le schéma affirmatif GN+ V est conservé.
(17) the top three items= même construction que pour « the first three items // the bottom two items= the last two items. »
(18) to buy goods= acheter des biens.
To be concerned with / about (cf (1))
(19) whether … or/ Ne pas confondre avec « the weather ».
(20) another area= singulier ; other areas = pluriel.

II. A few words have been deleted… Can you fill in the blanks and try to guess the missing words… (Of course, there are several « right » possibilities »… Yet, you’re required to choose the most satisfactory ones, fitting the situation.)

(Si j’avais eu plus de temps libre … j’aurais pu vous donner une note sur 20 [ en général, les Apprenants aiment bien les notes « chiffrées », surtout lorsque le barème est mathématique et qu’il est possible d’avoir 20 !) : vert = 2 points / souligné = un point/ bleu = 0… Vous pouvez calculer …pour vous « amuser » …

Making jeans can carry (1) a steep environmental toll, because the dye used to give them their usual blue (2) shade - indigo - does not easily stick to the raw cotton. "To get the dye on, we have to dye the fabric (3) multiple times," he says. "And by dying it multiple times, obviously we need to use more water and more energy."(4)
Then a jeans-maker may wash and bleach (5) the jeans many times to lighten the colour, creating even more waste water. By some estimates it can take thousands (6) of gallons (7) of water to make one pair of jeans./// END OF PART 1///
Such industries use a huge amount of water, and a huge amount of energy.
In many denim mills (8) and jeans factories the used (9) water - which contains the dye, plus bleach and other chemicals - is simply released as waste water. Thankfully, (10) a growing number of producers are now eliminating waste water altogether.///

(1) to take a toll/ carry a toll/ exact a toll/ = to have consequences.
(2) « blue jeans » = indigo.
(3) 'fabric' also found in these entries: canvas/ cloth/ construction/ cotton/ drapes/ network/ ribbon/ sackcloth/ satin/ serge/ silk/ stuff/ tapestry/ tissue/ voile/ gear/ important/ nylon/ satin/ silk/ stuff/ subject/ substance
(4) Pour fabriquer de la toile denim, (de Nîmes !) il faut de la matière, de l’énergie pour les machines et beaucoup, beaucoup d’eau !
(5) bleach : Lien internet

(6) (7) thousands of gallons … = A LOT of water ; a gallon= Lien internet
= 4,5 l en
(8) a mill= Lien internet
Synonyms: manufactory, plant , millhouse, factory , works
(9) used/ polluted/
(10) Ici, il fallait un adverbe, optimiste si possible, pour respecter la logique de la phrase.



Encore BRAVO à tous .... et



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de maxwell, postée le 27-07-2019 à 08:38:29 (S | E)
FINISHED
Hello
Comme il sera sûrement difficile de trouver autant de participants durant cet été, je prends le texte à trous, Part I & II

Making jeans can carry a steep environmental toll, because the dye used to give them their usual blue shade - indigo - does not easily stick to the raw cotton. "To get the dye on, we have to dye the fabric multiple times," he says. "And by dying it multiple times, obviously we need to use more water and more energy."
Then a jeans-maker may wash and bleach the jeans many times to lighten the colour, creating even more waste water. By some estimates it can take thousands of gallons of water to make one pair of jeans.
Such industries use a huge amount of water, and a huge amount of energy.
In many denim mills and jeans factories the used water - which contains the dye, plus bleach and other chemicals - is simply released as waste water. Thankfully, a growing number of producers are now eliminating waste water altogether.

Créer des jeans peut entraîner une facture environnementale salée, parce que la teinture utilisée pour leur donner leur teinte bleue - indigo - ne colle pas facilement au coton brut. "Pour que la teinte tienne, il faut teindre le tissu à maintes reprises.", dit-il. "Et en le teignant de nombreuses fois, on a évidemment besoin d'utiliser plus d'eau et d'énergie."
Puis un fabricant de jeans peut laver et décolorer (*) le jeans plusieurs fois pour rendre la couleur plus claire, générant encore plus d'eau usée. Selon certaines estimations, plusieurs milliers de litres d'eau peuvent être nécessaires à la fabrication d'une paire de jeans.
De telles industries utilisent une immense quantité d'eau et une immense quantité d'énergie.
Dans de nombreuses usines de denim et de manufactures de jeans, l'eau polluée - qui contient de la teinture, plus de l'eau de Javel et d'autres produits chimiques - est simplement évacuée comme des eaux usées.
Heureusement, de plus en plus de fabricants éliminent maintenant entièrement les eaux usées.

(*) j'étais tenté de mettre : délaver



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de here4u, postée le 27-07-2019 à 08:53:54 (S | E)
😀

Sagesse et réalisme, notre cher Maxwell ! Restons optimistes, quand même !




Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de icare29, postée le 27-07-2019 à 11:28:18 (S | E)
Hello everybody .
je me porte volontaire pour la traduction de part 1.
icare




Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de magie8, postée le 27-07-2019 à 18:29:34 (S | E)
bonjour , je travaille sur la 2eme partie pendant les vacances on a tout le temps. magie8



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de magie8, postée le 27-07-2019 à 19:27:50 (S | E)
HELLO Très chers tous

By opening up its doors, this company is able to show potential customers that its factory is clean, the 20 employees (6) are happy, and that the jeans are worth keeping - rather than throwing (7) away at the end of each season.
Visitors to the workshop can even get a bite to eat, as it is home to a pop-up restaurant at weekends.(8) More importantly, the company sources all its rolls of denim from mills in Japan, Italy and Turkey that have personally been visited to ensure their commitment to environmental and social responsibility. )./// END OF PART 2///

En faisant des journées portes ouvertes,cette compagnie est capable de montrer aux clients potentiels que son usine est propre , que les employés sont heureux et que les jeans méritent bien d'être gardés plutôt que d'être jetés à chaque fin de saison.
Les visiteurs du magasin d'usine peuvent même manger un morceau comme à la maison au restaurant éphémère ouvert en fin de semaine.
Plus important,d'après les sources de la compagnie tous ses rouleaux de toile Denim proviennent des manufactures du Japon,Italie,et Turquie qui ont été visitées personnellement afin de s'assurer de leur engagement en matière de responsabilité environnementale et sociale.



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de icare29, postée le 28-07-2019 à 11:59:58 (S | E)
Hello everybody.
Here is my proposal about part 1 translation.

Why blue jeans are going green (**)
As consumers become ever more concerned about (1) environmental and ethical issues, pioneers in the global denim industry are cleaning up its * act. Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, which describes itself as a "craft jeans maker", has an open-door policy (2). Anybody can walk in, even without an (3) appointment ; through that they create « transparency ». (= a buzzword in fashion of (4) late, with labels keen to show ** their best practice, both in terms of how well they treat staff and how environmentally friendly they are (5).
/// END OF PART 1///

Et si l'indigo se colorait en vert......
De nos jours , les consommateurs n'ont jamais été autant concernés par les problèmes éthiques et environnementaux, aussi les précurseurs de l'industrie mondialisée de jeans agissent pour s'acheter une conduite.
Blackhorse Lane Ateliers se décrivant eux-mêmes comme fabricants artisanaux de jeans pratiquent une politique d'ouverture .Tout un chacun peut y venir et visiter, même sans aucun rendez-vous .A travers cette politique ils appliquent la "transparence ", un récent mot à la mode, avec des labels soucieux de montrer les meilleurs savoir -faire , non seulement dans l'amélioration du traitement du personnel, mais aussi dans l'implication en faveur de l'écologie .



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de icare29, postée le 30-07-2019 à 18:30:11 (S | E)
Hello everybody .
I gathered all my courage and I tried to translate part 4 , which was not easy to do

Some of the big name jeans firms are also working hard to reduce their environmental impact, using a foam instead of water ; the process also reduces energy use by 60.
Yet, what percentage of shoppers (14) are currently happy to pay the higher price tag (15) that more ethically sourced jeans often carry? At Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, for example, their most expensive jeans cost £260.
When you ask consumers about what their primary motivations are (16) for purchasing in apparel, )./// END OF PART 4///

Quelques compagnies, aux noms bien connus ,ont entrepris de gros efforts pour réduire l'impact sur l'environnement en utilisant de la mousse à la place de l'eau ; ce procédé réduit également l'énergie consommée de 60 pour cent. Quel pourcentage de consommateurs est réellement désireux de payer un prix de jean plus élevé que celui du jean issu de plus en plus du commerce équitable pour être porté souvent . Par exemple , le prix du jean le plus coûteux sortant des Ateliers Blackhorse Lane s'élève à 260 dollars . Quand vous interrogez les consommateurs à propos de leurs motivations premières, celles ci concernent l'achat d'un vêtement ....



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de here4u, postée le 30-07-2019 à 21:47:50 (S | E)
HELLO!
Hello everybody.
Thanks, Icare, for your translation of part 1.

Why blue jeans are going green (**)
As consumers become ever more concerned about (1) environmental and ethical issues, pioneers in the global denim industry are cleaning up its * act. Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, which describes itself as a "craft jeans maker", has an open-door policy (2). Anybody can walk in, even without an (3) appointment ; through that they create « transparency ». (= a buzzword in fashion of (4) late, with labels keen to show ** their best practice, both in terms of how well they treat staff and how environmentally friendly they are (5).
/// END OF PART 1///

Et si l' indigo le "blue jean" devenait vert ...
De nos jours, les consommateurs n'ont jamais été autant concernés par les problèmes éthiques et environnementaux, aussi les précurseurs de l'industrie mondialisée de jeans agissent pour s'acheter une conduite.
Blackhorse Lane Ateliers se décrivant eux-mêmes comme fabricants artisanaux de jeans pratiquent une politique d'ouverture. Tout un chacun peut y venir et visiter, même sans rendez-vous. A travers cette politique ils appliquent la "transparence", un mot récent à la mode, avec des labels soucieux de montrer les meilleurs savoir-faire, non seulement dans l'amélioration du traitement du personnel, mais aussi dans l'implication en faveur de l'écologie.
Bravo et merci, Icare !

By opening up its doors, this company is able to show potential customers that its factory is clean, the 20 employees (6) are happy, and that the jeans are worth keeping - rather than throwing (7) away at the end of each season.
Visitors to the workshop can even get a bite to eat, as it is home to a pop-up restaurant at weekends.(8) More importantly, the company sources all its rolls of denim from mills in Japan, Italy and Turkey that have personally been visited to ensure their commitment to environmental and social responsibility. )./// END OF PART 2///

En faisant des journées portes ouvertes, cette compagnie est capable de montrer aux clients potentiels que son usine est propre, que les 20 employés sont heureux et que les jeans méritent bien d'être gardés plutôt que d'être jetés à chaque fin de saison.
Les visiteurs du magasin d'usine peuvent même manger un morceau comme à la maison au restaurant éphémère qui y est hébergé toutes les fins de semaine.
Plus important, d'après les sources de la compagnie tous les rouleaux de toile Denim de la compagnie proviennent de manufactures du Japon, d'Italie et Turquie qui ont été contrôlées personnellement afin de s'assurer de leur engagement en matière de responsabilité environnementale et sociale. Bravo et merci, Magie!


This is vital for any jeans company that wishes to be ethical (9), because the manufacture of denim can be heavily polluting (10).
Saitex International is one such business.**** Its factory now recycles 98% of the water (11) it uses. For the remaining 2% it has an evaporation system, making it a zero discharge facility.
Before setting up the factory in 2010 the Company started looking at sanitation, or inadequate sanitation, globally, and the lack of clean drinking water (12). Morally it pushed them to start looking at water as a very valuable resource. It took the company just six years to earn back (13) the money it invested in the water recycling technology. )./// END OF PART 3///

Ceci est vital pour toute entreprise de jeans qui souhaite être éthique (9), car la fabrication de toile denim peut être très polluante (10).
Saitex International est l’une de ces entreprises. ***Son usine recycle maintenant 98 % de l’eau (11) qu’elle utilise. Pour les 2% restants, elle dispose d’un système d’évaporation, ce qui en fait une installation sans déversement pollué.
Avant d’implanter l’usine en 2010, la société commença à se pencher sur l’assainissement, ou l’assainissement inapproprié, dans son ensemble, et le manque d’eau potable propre (12). Moralement, cela les a poussés à considérer l’eau comme une ressource très précieuse. Cela ne prit à l’entreprise que six ans pour amortir (13) l’argent qu’elle avait investi dans la technologie de recyclage de l’eau. ). /// FIN DE LA PARTIE 3//

Bravo et merci, Taiji !

Some of the big name jeans firms are also working hard to reduce their environmental impact, using a foam instead of water ; the process also reduces energy use by 60.
Yet, what percentage of shoppers (14) are currently happy to pay the higher price tag (15) that more ethically sourced jeans often carry? At Blackhorse Lane Ateliers, for example, their most expensive jeans cost £260.
When you ask consumers about what their primary motivations are (16) for purchasing in apparel, )./// END OF PART 4///

Quelques compagnies, aux noms bien connus, ont entrepris de gros efforts pour réduire l'impact sur l'environnement en utilisant de la mousse à la place de l'eau ; ce procédé réduit également l'énergie consommée de 60 pour cent. Cependant, combien de consommateurs ont vraiment envie d'avoir une étiquette à un prix plus élevé pour un jean issu de plus en plus du commerce équitable ? Par exemple, le prix du jean le plus coûteux sortant des Ateliers Blackhorse Lane s'élève à 260 dollars. Quand vous interrogez les consommateurs à propos de leurs motivations premières, celles ci concernent l'achat d'un vêtement,
Encore un super grand MERCI, Icare !
then it's about price, about convenience, about range, and quality of product. Actually, sustainability - and ethical sourcing - doesn't necessarily sit within the top three (17) of what's important for consumers when thinking about purchasing for apparel goods (18).
But the situation is changing, with rising demand for more ethical clothing being led by young people.
They've become a lot more concerned about the societal impact that they're having, whether (19) that's on the environment, the economy, and other areas (20) as well. ).)/// END OF PART 5///

puis leurs motivations sont le prix, le confort, le choix offert, et la qualité du produit. En fait, la durabilité, et la question éthique, ne se positionnent pas nécessairement dans le top trois de ce qui est important aux yeux des consommateurs quand ils pensent acheter de l'habillement.
Mais la situation est en train de changer, grâce à une demande croissante pour un habillement plus éthique conduite par la jeune génération. Ils sont devenus plus responsables de l'impact sociétal qu'ils ont sur leur environnement, l'économie, aussi bien que dans les autres domaines.
Bravo et merci, Choco!


Hello! merci, maxwell!
Making jeans can carry a steep environmental toll, because the dye used to give them their usual blue shade - indigo - does not easily stick to the raw cotton. "To get the dye on, we have to dye the fabric multiple times," he says. "And by dying it multiple times, obviously we need to use more water and more energy."
Then a jeans-maker may wash and bleach the jeans many times to lighten the colour, creating even more waste water. By some estimates it can take thousands of gallons of water to make one pair of jeans.
Such industries use a huge amount of water, and a huge amount of energy.
In many denim mills and jeans factories the used water - which contains the dye, plus bleach and other chemicals - is simply released as waste water. Thankfully, a growing number of producers are now eliminating waste water altogether.

Créer des jeans peut entraîner une facture environnementale salée, parce que la teinture utilisée pour leur donner leur teinte bleue - indigo - ne colle pas facilement au coton brut. "Pour que la teinte tienne, il faut teindre le tissu à maintes reprises.", dit-il. "Et en le teignant de nombreuses fois, on a évidemment besoin d'utiliser plus d'eau et d'énergie."
Puis un fabricant de jeans peut laver et délaver/ décolorer (*) le jeans plusieurs fois pour rendre la couleur plus claire, générant encore plus d'eau usée. Selon certaines estimations, plusieurs milliers de litres d'eau peuvent être nécessaires à la fabrication d'une paire de jeans. De telles industries utilisent une immense quantité d'eau et une immense quantité d'énergie.
Dans de nombreuses usines de denim et de manufactures de jeans, l'eau polluée - qui contient de la teinture, plus de l'eau de Javel et d'autres produits chimiques - est simplement évacuée comme des eaux usées.
Heureusement, de plus en plus de fabricants éliminent/ retraitent maintenant entièrement les eaux usées.
TTTB! Merci!


Merci encore à nos valeureux volontaires courageux, et doublement à ceux qui se sont portés volontaires deux fois pour une correction extrêmement difficile.
You're GREAT!




Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de icare29, postée le 30-07-2019 à 23:35:44 (S | E)
Hello everybody

Be careful ; I posted today my proposal about part 4.
It remains part 3 and part 5 to translate.
Icare



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de taiji43, postée le 31-07-2019 à 14:48:39 (S | E)
I am going to translate 3 and 5 this afternoon within one, two hours



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de taiji43, postée le 31-07-2019 à 17:28:22 (S | E)
thank you to Maxwell for the part (5 )

Here is my translation (third part)

This is vital for any jeans company that wishes to be ethical (9), because the manufacture of denim can be heavily polluting (10).
Saitex International is one such business.**** Its factory now recycles 98% of the water (11) it uses. For the remaining 2% it has an evaporation system, making it a zero discharge facility.
Before setting up the factory in 2010 the Company started looking at sanitation, or inadequate sanitation, globally, and the lack of clean drinking water (12). Morally it pushed them to start looking at water as a very valuable resource. It took the company just six years to earn back (13) the money it invested in the water recycling technology. )./// END OF PART 3///

Ceci est vital pour toute entreprise de jeans qui souhaite être éthique (9), car la fabrication de denim peut être très polluante (10).
Saitex International est l’une de ces entreprises. ***Son usine recycle maintenant 98 % de l’eau (11) qu’elle utilise. Pour les 2% restants, il dispose d’un système d’évaporation, ce qui en fait une installation sans déversement polluée
Avant d’implanter l’usine en 2010, la société commença à se pencher sur l’assainissement, ou l’assainissement inappropriée, à l’échelle mondiale, et le manque d’eau potable propre (12). Moralement, cela les a poussés à considérer l’eau comme une ressource très précieuse. Cela prit à l’entreprise que six ans pour récupérer (13) l’argent qu’elle avait investi dans la technologie de recyclage de l’eau. ). /// FIN DE LA PARTIE 3//



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de chocolatcitron, postée le 01-08-2019 à 01:31:13 (S | E)
Hello !!!
Je m'essaie à la partie 4 pour que tu puisses terminer.

then it's about price, about convenience, about range, and quality of product. Actually, sustainability - and ethical sourcing - doesn't necessarily sit within the top three (17) of what's important for consumers when thinking about purchasing for apparel goods (18).
But the situation is changing, with rising demand for more ethical clothing being led by young people.
They've become a lot more concerned about the societal impact that they're having, whether (19) that's on the environment, the economy, and other areas (20) as well. ).)/// END OF PART 5///

puis c'est au sujet du prix, du confort, du choix offert, et de la qualité du produit. En fait, la durabilité, et la question éthique, ne se positionnent pas nécessairement dans le top trois, de ce qui est important aux yeux des consommateurs quand ils pensent acheter de l'habillement.
Mais la situation est en train de changer, par une demande montante pour un habillement plus éthique conduite par la jeune génération. Ils sont devenus plus responsables de l'impact sociétal qu'ils ont sur leur environnement, l'économie, et aussi bien que dans les autres domaines.



Réponse : Rack your Brains and Help/ 50 de here4u, postée le 01-08-2019 à 22:57:03 (S | E)
Correction complète ! Merci encore à tous !




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