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Message de flori posté le 22-12-2005 à 17:38:09 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour !
Voilà, je dois rendre un devoir en anglais, et j'aimerais si possible qu'on me relise et qu'on corrige mes fautes.
Merci à ceux qui répondront !
"These days, the music has taken an important place in the teenager’s life. Young people listen music at home, in bus, at school… But music hasn’t same meaning for two different persons.
When someone says “music”, each think at a particular type of music (jazz, rock, techno…). Yet, the word “music” gathers all types. I think many people aren’t enough open-minded, and don’t try to know other types of music. It’s a pity. Each music has its characteristics. Each music has something than others don’t have. To refuse to listen to other types of music, it’s to prevent oneself discovering and liking new things. A music can be to like, whereas it wasn’t it at the beginning. I heard a story: a man only listened jazz, and a woman only rock. The man didn’t like rock and the woman didn’t like jazz. They were married and now, the woman love jazz and the man love rock. That proves that more you listening a musical style, more you like it.
For much, music is just “to listen”, whereas music is also “to sing”, “to dance”, “to play”… The majority of people listen music just to occupy and relax oneself. But music is a profound thing. It’s something we have in us, which makes us to dream, to dance… Everybody can move on music, everybody can mark the rhythm with the foot. I think music is marvellous, because we needn’t nothing to create it. Our two hands are enough to create a rhythm, our voice is enough to create a melody. It exists since the night of times and I think it’ll be able to never disappear.
Music is always present. It mark the time of fetes. Perhaps music has a different meaning for each person, but if one thing is sure, it’s it can to bring together opposing people and to create strong links."
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Edité par bridg le 22-12-2005 17:43
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Message de flori posté le 22-12-2005 à 17:38:09 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour !
Voilà, je dois rendre un devoir en anglais, et j'aimerais si possible qu'on me relise et qu'on corrige mes fautes.
Merci à ceux qui répondront !
"These days, the music has taken an important place in the teenager’s life. Young people listen music at home, in bus, at school… But music hasn’t same meaning for two different persons.
When someone says “music”, each think at a particular type of music (jazz, rock, techno…). Yet, the word “music” gathers all types. I think many people aren’t enough open-minded, and don’t try to know other types of music. It’s a pity. Each music has its characteristics. Each music has something than others don’t have. To refuse to listen to other types of music, it’s to prevent oneself discovering and liking new things. A music can be to like, whereas it wasn’t it at the beginning. I heard a story: a man only listened jazz, and a woman only rock. The man didn’t like rock and the woman didn’t like jazz. They were married and now, the woman love jazz and the man love rock. That proves that more you listening a musical style, more you like it.
For much, music is just “to listen”, whereas music is also “to sing”, “to dance”, “to play”… The majority of people listen music just to occupy and relax oneself. But music is a profound thing. It’s something we have in us, which makes us to dream, to dance… Everybody can move on music, everybody can mark the rhythm with the foot. I think music is marvellous, because we needn’t nothing to create it. Our two hands are enough to create a rhythm, our voice is enough to create a melody. It exists since the night of times and I think it’ll be able to never disappear.
Music is always present. It mark the time of fetes. Perhaps music has a different meaning for each person, but if one thing is sure, it’s it can to bring together opposing people and to create strong links."
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Edité par bridg le 22-12-2005 17:43
A la demande de webmaster il est demandé aux membres et aux modérateurs de ne plus corriger les textes complets des devoirs ni les dissertations:
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