Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais
Tout ce qui a un rapport avec l'apprentissage de l'anglais: grammaire, orthographe, aides aux devoirs, phrases etc.
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Message de bourges posté le 24-03-2006 à 08:58:15 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Dans le cadre des cours d'anglais que je suis à l'Institut Municipal de la ville que j'habite j'ai, chaque semaine, un " devoir " à faire à la maison.
Cette semaine, j'ai à remettre en ordre correct deux lettres, et ensuite à y répondre ( formal and informal letters ).
Je vous communique ci-dessous le résultat de mon " travail " en vous remerciant de me faire part de vos observations .
Premier texte à remettre dans l'ordre correct :
Dear Alice and Jim,
Would you having a look for me ?
The conversation was excellent and the food delicious !
I think I left a pair of brown trosers in the wardbrode of my room.
I had a wonderful time.
Please can you let me know if you find them?
Thank you for having me to stay last weekend.
It was lovely to see you all. See you again soon.
Could you do something for me ?
Thanks a lot.
Love - Jack
L'ordre correct me semble être le suivant :
Thank you for having me to stay last week end.
I had a wonderful time.
The conversation was excellent and the food delicious !
Could you do something me ?
I think I left a pair of brown trousers in the wardrobe of my room.
Would you mind having a look for me ?
Please can you let me know if you find them ?
It was lovely to see you all. See you again soon !
Thanks a lot.
Love - Jack
Deuxième lettre à remettre dans l'ordre )
Dear Reception,
Could you possibly check if this is so ?
The service was superb and the food delicious !
I have lost a pair of brown trousers, which I think I left in the wardrobe of my room.
We had a very pleasant stay.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Many thanks for the weekend break that my wife and I enjoyed at your hotel recently.
We hope to visit your hotel again soon.
I would like to ask you a favour.
I would be most grateful !
Yours sincerly - Jack Higgins.
L'ordre se la deuxième lettre semble être le suivant :
Many thanks for thr weekend break that my wife and I enjoyed at your hotel recently .
We had a very pleasant stay.
The service was superb and the food delicious !
We hope to visit your hotel again soon.
I would like to ask you a favour.
I have lost a pair of brown trousers, which I think I left in the wardrobe of my room.
Could you possibly check if this so ?
I would be most grateful.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely.
Jack Higgins.
Le troisième " devoir " consistait à répondre à chaque lettre en expliquant que nous avons recherché soigneusement le pantalon mais que nous ne l'avons pas trouvé :
Première lettre ( réponse d'Alice et Jim à Jack )
Dera Jack,
Thanks for your letter.
We enjoyed you have had a pleasant time, too.
I'm sorry but I looked everywhere and I couldn't find your trousers.
Have you looked in your luggage ?
Perhaps you have forgotten them at home !
Sorry I can't help any more.
See you soon....
Deuxième lettre ( réponse de l'hôtel ) :
Dera Mr Higgins
Thank you for your letter of 13 january.
We are delighted that you have had a pleasant stay in our hotel.
We are sorry to inform you that we have been unable to find our trousers.
We looked in all parts of your room.
We look forward to see you in our hotel.....
Merci par avance pour vos corrections.
Message de bourges posté le 24-03-2006 à 08:58:15 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Dans le cadre des cours d'anglais que je suis à l'Institut Municipal de la ville que j'habite j'ai, chaque semaine, un " devoir " à faire à la maison.
Cette semaine, j'ai à remettre en ordre correct deux lettres, et ensuite à y répondre ( formal and informal letters ).
Je vous communique ci-dessous le résultat de mon " travail " en vous remerciant de me faire part de vos observations .
Premier texte à remettre dans l'ordre correct :
Dear Alice and Jim,
Would you having a look for me ?
The conversation was excellent and the food delicious !
I think I left a pair of brown trosers in the wardbrode of my room.
I had a wonderful time.
Please can you let me know if you find them?
Thank you for having me to stay last weekend.
It was lovely to see you all. See you again soon.
Could you do something for me ?
Thanks a lot.
Love - Jack
L'ordre correct me semble être le suivant :
Thank you for having me to stay last week end.
I had a wonderful time.
The conversation was excellent and the food delicious !
Could you do something me ?
I think I left a pair of brown trousers in the wardrobe of my room.
Would you mind having a look for me ?
Please can you let me know if you find them ?
It was lovely to see you all. See you again soon !
Thanks a lot.
Love - Jack
Deuxième lettre à remettre dans l'ordre )
Dear Reception,
Could you possibly check if this is so ?
The service was superb and the food delicious !
I have lost a pair of brown trousers, which I think I left in the wardrobe of my room.
We had a very pleasant stay.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Many thanks for the weekend break that my wife and I enjoyed at your hotel recently.
We hope to visit your hotel again soon.
I would like to ask you a favour.
I would be most grateful !
Yours sincerly - Jack Higgins.
L'ordre se la deuxième lettre semble être le suivant :
Many thanks for thr weekend break that my wife and I enjoyed at your hotel recently .
We had a very pleasant stay.
The service was superb and the food delicious !
We hope to visit your hotel again soon.
I would like to ask you a favour.
I have lost a pair of brown trousers, which I think I left in the wardrobe of my room.
Could you possibly check if this so ?
I would be most grateful.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely.
Jack Higgins.
Le troisième " devoir " consistait à répondre à chaque lettre en expliquant que nous avons recherché soigneusement le pantalon mais que nous ne l'avons pas trouvé :
Première lettre ( réponse d'Alice et Jim à Jack )
Dera Jack,
Thanks for your letter.
We enjoyed you have had a pleasant time, too.
I'm sorry but I looked everywhere and I couldn't find your trousers.
Have you looked in your luggage ?
Perhaps you have forgotten them at home !
Sorry I can't help any more.
See you soon....
Deuxième lettre ( réponse de l'hôtel ) :
Dera Mr Higgins
Thank you for your letter of 13 january.
We are delighted that you have had a pleasant stay in our hotel.
We are sorry to inform you that we have been unable to find our trousers.
We looked in all parts of your room.
We look forward to see you in our hotel.....
Merci par avance pour vos corrections.
Réponse: Remise en ordre d'un texte de jean31, postée le 24-03-2006 à 11:51:04 (S | E)
Bonjour bourges,
Premier texte OK.
Deuxième texte OK. (Juste 1 omission du verbe à :... check if this IS so ?
Troisième devoir 1 OK 2 OK (attention aux fautes de frappe sur Dear et ...Your trousers)
Bonne continuation avec l'anglais.
Réponse: Remise en ordre d'un texte de steeve34, postée le 24-03-2006 à 11:55:38 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Voici une proposition pour la réponse à la deuxième lettre.
We are delighted that you made the most of your enjoyable stay at our hotel.
Despite all our efforts to find them, your trousers were nowhere to be found.
We are looking forward to seeing you again.